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It is insanely good. I love every part of it, only miss Rei a bit. Wondergirl should appear more.I sent you a message on yopur pixiv page. I really hope it will be continued.

It's a little more complex than that Gendo, not everything is as it seems. This isn't done for the sake of shock value.

@ Gendo There's a reason for that, keep reading.

This is not a story of suffering Asuka being raped and despair, is only one more story cliches Netorare as Inoccent Blue, Kagachi-sama Onagusame Tatematsurimasu: Netorare Mura Inya Hanashi and Kedamono-tachi no Sumu Ie de. In addition to the typical cliches netorare, no there is the possibility of a psychological suffering to Asuka, at least not when she regains self-awareness and think that personal relationships are more important than sex and she's subjected to something she doesn't want. Asuka has become like the Ai of Kanojo ga Mimai ni Konai Wake, she no cares about anything other than sex. The pain would come from Asuka be forced to act against their conscience or try to be someone else, but can't free himself of herself. Every time she acts in a different way than she is, becoming another person would lead to psychological suffering or if she is a person and want to be another, free himself of herself. Asuka shouldn't accept your rape, even in the beginning she won't take it and after mind break (Mind break is experiences such a high degree of sexual pleasure ther mind of Asuka goes into a state of severe stupor. In this state Asuka would lose the ability to think clearly and register information such as pain) she passes like being abused.The suffering comes Asuka of the would not want to be with Musashi, Keita, Kensuke, Toji and other, she hates everything and your conscience makes you wish the shinji; Or she wants to break free of his love for shinji and surrender the debauchery, but your love for he prevents the full delivery, she loves him more than anything. Sex becomes the most important thing and it has when it should be baka shinji, conflict is having sex with who does she not love and Asuka wanted to be is with baka shinji. Asuka should only be able to have sex with Musashi under the effects of drugs. She would go find repulsive have his penis inside her and for the sex she have pessimistic thoughts about him, she can not react because of drugs , even drugged Asuka still have some awareness Asuka and she does not like what you're doing. In the kitchen scene she isn't drugged and yet she preferred do sex with Musashi than with shinji, when she should be imagined having sex with shinji or refusing to have sex. Even if I wanted to have sex also with the shinji, still mistreated him, then she thought better of it and repented, but she should have the notion that it would be shinji's penis and not Musashi who should be inside her when she's not drugged. This fanfiction is like other doujinshi Netorare as Taihai no Susume of Fate Saty Night, To LOVE-hi - Tora Buhii- of To Love Ru, HIGH SCHOOL DxIf NDT High School DxD, Victim Girls 6 - Heaven Eleven + Omake of Code Geass, Reitama hibike of euphonium. Suffering is the masculine which lost the woman he loves and female not being away from the man she loves as Shinji lost Asuka, because is having destroyed their self-conscience, soon she barely knows who she is, she's not even aware of their dreams and desires, their interactions, on her actions, she knows are the categories of the pleasant and the unpleasant, she has no conscience of its suffering would not achieve what you want. Your senses have more power than your intellect, then she in the has more salvation because she lives the senses, she didn't think that lost that is more important than sex. Only when pleasure and she introspectively look inside of herself and think of everything lost, she will suffer and be aware of who walked away or start thinking. The script is always the same: drugs + rape + mind break + fall in love with fur dick of the rapist + the old passion of the protagonist masturbates seeing her having sex with her rapist+ the protagonist ridicule of the cock of the old love= Netorare. In the kitchen scene, Asuka mocks of the cock of shinji that would be small, she the the holds masturbating the cock of shinji because it would be too small for sex e and shinji if masturbates watching Asuka Musashi having sex.In Netorare, during sex the woman does the expression of ahegao. A term used to describe the facial expressions of hentai anime and mangas girls who are being raped, and hence their mental health has hit rock bottom. And this fanfiction was no different. The kitchen scene would be Asuka drugged, but conscious, suffering seeing shinji watching her having sex with Musashi or roma consciousness after effect. To convey the suffering of the Asuka, because in addition to having sex with who does not love, loses shinji. Suffering is that Asuka is undergoing something she does not like and has no pleasure and still lose his friendship and his old love. Staying alone.

I think you do very well writing about the emotional pain Asuka has gone through. Little touches like Asuka telling Mari how her weekend excursion hurt her really add to her emotional destruction and give depth to her abuse.

That collection of cliches netorare, evangelion sought avoid and subvert the clichés. - Bikini - big penis of the rapist - blackmail - cat ear - collar - dark skin - drugs - mind break - piercing - prostitution - Rape - record videos of sexual abuse and disseminates them - swimsuit - Small cock of the shinji that is the love of Asuka. Just not yet appeared pregnancy of Asuka. . This is no different from hentais as Otomi Dori, True Blue and Triangle Blue. There is the harrowing depth of Evangelion, only cliches ntr. There is no more false cliche than the mind break.

Forget the clichés: - Mind Control - Exhibitionism - nakadashi - Take pictures during the sexual abuse - Slave

Not a fan of the scat stuff, but the writing quality is still great. The scenes with the black gentleman were quite well done. Hopefully we'll see more Rei in the future, maybe she might be submissive enough to accept a pregnancy or take having piercings done a lot better.

Excellent chapter as always, but we need more Rei!