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May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
For those who think the disturbing fanfiction, see these doujinshi.
Worst scene is when shinji is forced to have sex in the face of Hikari and Asuka got to see everything and suffers.
http://pururin.com/view/14090/02/a-seven_3.html
http://pururin.com/gallery/8406/a-six-kansaihan.html
http://pururin.com/gallery/7800/a-five.html
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http://pururin.com/view/7799/015/a-two_16.html
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May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This scene gave feather Asuka, see the guy she loves having sex with another girl.
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http://pururin.com/f/0186c1579b21b7b0de8eb560dcb31a8b573b9a09/a-six-kansaihan-23.jpg
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http://pururin.com/f/0186c1579b21b7b0de8eb560dcb31a8b573b9a09/a-six-kansaihan-23.jpg
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May 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It gave me a squeeze in the heart of Asuka so degraded and humiliated.It is reduced to an animal.
I sincerely hope that shinji discover the whole truth and take revenge of everyone there.
I sincerely hope that shinji discover the whole truth and take revenge of everyone there.
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May 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You must place at the end shinji putting Mana, Ritsuko, Yui, Musashi and keita in jail, which Asuka break the Touji's face, kensuke and mari.
This story can not be something hot, but fill me with anguish and shame of Asuka. She deserves to be happy next to the shinji and hope he turn man and defend.
All the more contempt is keita. Love mana, for she prefer shinji, he cashes his rage on Asuka. not to be a man and challenge Ikari or try to drop it his frustration.
Musashi besides raping Asuka, leaves her helpless when she needs someone when it is expelled by Yui. I hope it's abuse victim in jail.
It would be epic at the end shinji disowning her mother and marrying the Asuka. Nothing worse for a mother to be denied or your child. And that Asuka break all the teeth and leave full of ematomas Touji, kensuke and Mari.
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May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Here are fanfictions with sexual content. Until liked many fanficitons.
This fanficion would be actually a mixture of the cap universe. 26 Evangelion, more game characters Neon Genesis Evangelion: Girlfriend of Steel and taking the Mari Rebuild. In this world there are evas despite seeing references to scenes of The End of Evangelion. A desperate shinji would kill Asuka there, just as parari on the beach when he demonstrated affection for him.
Yui would never do what he did Asuka without thinking of the greater good for your child and humanity, as in The End of Evangelion to let Asuka die. What she did was only hurt the shinji, had no benefit for him his suffering. She nõ hurt you so shinji was more resolute and faced danger and were more determined with Asuka, she ended up doing it with Asuka and wounding at shinji to make a girl on a nymphomaniac. It was not something pragmatic for the son of Yui as she thought of the series. All she did was think about shinji to give you control of the instrumentality. And she acted on the show several times and have not listened to Gendo and protecting sue son, all thinking of him as well.
The Mana game or manga Shinji Ikari Raising Project does have a strong love for shinji but unable for mere jealousy hurt or produce pain to someone else as she did with Asuka. Up 'cause she won the hearts of shinji there.
The Asuka was tough and would never accept being raped and blackmailed and when she suffered a terrible shock co Arael she was and coma shortly after finding that his life had no value. As strong as the sexual abuse was the painful memories of his life that did try to commit suicide. She had complete contempt for Kensuke, Touji (only a discarded scene from The end of Evangelion Asuka appears with Touji) and King (only Rebuild she became friends soon), full Asuka harbored contempt for them. Asuka only shinji accept the surrender as the scene of the train she claims to know of his fantasies with her and she wanted him to be her or would not want to know him. In episode 25, Asuka also criticized the behavior of Misato, judging be dirty.
Shinji was exaggerated their cowardice when he hi able to protect Touji and Kensuke when their paths were threatened, risking his life by jumping into the volcano Asuka attack the NERV to avenge what Touji suffered, returning to defend his fellow Zeruel and wish defend Asuka Arael, only when he lost everything shinji wanted to die. Shinji up feeling hurt was able to devastated humanity with instrumentality, he feels there would be desperate measures. The shinji manga is even worse because it is extremely cynical and violent. Not putting up with shit.
The Yui plan was entirely exaggerated, without worrying about the realism of the series.
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May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Kyoko, let me copy paste the Disclaimer the author has at the start of this fic - This lemon is a collective work of two authors and was inspired by an original Japanese Evangelion lemon called `Innocent Taboo' found in a certain infamous website, but is original in its own regard. It happens in the alternative Evangelion universe but slightly differs from this as it also includes Girlfriend of Steel characters. Needless to say this is for adults only, and some themes and scenes are rather strong, which some may and probably will find to be offensive, so be warned. Any connections with real life events are purely accidental.
He himself has stated this is an alternate universe pic and that this is not for everyone. Clearly it is not for you. However, you seem to have put a lot of thought as to how you would like an Eva adult fan fiction to be. May I suggest you have a go at trying to write your own fan fiction? You might surprise yourself if it turns out you have great talent at creating your own works. Though I do recommend you work with a proofreader. I'm assuming English is not your original language, and I commend you for attempting to make paragraphs of critique in a non-native language, but it is a struggle to read your review of this fic. I say this because your review doesn't seem like it was someone typing in English as a second language and more like you've put your words through a translating program. If that is the case, I'm wondering if you read this fic using Google's translator and have lost some of this fic's nuances because of how poorly a program would have translated this fic into your own language.
He himself has stated this is an alternate universe pic and that this is not for everyone. Clearly it is not for you. However, you seem to have put a lot of thought as to how you would like an Eva adult fan fiction to be. May I suggest you have a go at trying to write your own fan fiction? You might surprise yourself if it turns out you have great talent at creating your own works. Though I do recommend you work with a proofreader. I'm assuming English is not your original language, and I commend you for attempting to make paragraphs of critique in a non-native language, but it is a struggle to read your review of this fic. I say this because your review doesn't seem like it was someone typing in English as a second language and more like you've put your words through a translating program. If that is the case, I'm wondering if you read this fic using Google's translator and have lost some of this fic's nuances because of how poorly a program would have translated this fic into your own language.
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May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think the characterizations of Asuka and Shinji are close to how the originals act if put in similar situations. And the author/s should be commended for how much they develop the angst instead of just describing sex acts like most adult fics. If anything they give the characters more depth than can be done in a 26 episode movie anime or a 4 movie series. The only characters that seem really OOC are Mana and Yui and thy have to act that way as a ploy device. If you really want characters perfectly close to how they act in the series, may I suggest rewatching that? Fanfics that follow the source material closely are far and few between.
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May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a horrible Fanfiction and without any connection with the series.
The Asuka does not remember that tsudere who was able to die struggled without yielding to SEELLE, shinji is only a degraded boy when he is able to risk his life for his friends, face and suborn the NERV and violence when they feel hurt, He is able to kill. Yui did what he did for a higher reason and not to make a girl a slut. King could be passive and manipulated by Commander Ikari, but would not accept a good being sexually abused. It is another Shinji, Asuka another.
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The plot is too implausible the story of blackmail and drugging.
What was the idea of the series, accept the suffering of existence and that only then would overcome the loneliness and not in instrumentality. The characters have learned and evolved are not without problems, but there is a growth there. Everything is sorrow to grow and overcome.
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Yui would not cause damage and suffering to Asuka and Shinji mainly to without having some greater goal in mind as the evolution and growth of shinji or the evolution of humanity. It would not cause it caused in Asuka and wounding shinji for the pleasure of making Asuka a whore. The suffering that shinji would serve to him to learn something and grow as a person or any end to the good of humanidade.O suffering caused shinji would learn from their mistakes, accumulating wisdom and evolving as a person, as well as becoming tougher difficulties .
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All that Asuka spent only serves to degrade it and to show how a whore who only knows how to relate sexually, no difficulty to do to make a better person that seeks to relate to people overcome their problems, become more open with their feelings. Yui just want to degrade and become a whore.
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What is the intention of the story is just trying to show Asuka being a slut and a degraded shinji weak. Fucking a girl and a boy banana watching passively for masturbation pleasures. But without a consistent plot.
The Asuka does not remember that tsudere who was able to die struggled without yielding to SEELLE, shinji is only a degraded boy when he is able to risk his life for his friends, face and suborn the NERV and violence when they feel hurt, He is able to kill. Yui did what he did for a higher reason and not to make a girl a slut. King could be passive and manipulated by Commander Ikari, but would not accept a good being sexually abused. It is another Shinji, Asuka another.
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The plot is too implausible the story of blackmail and drugging.
What was the idea of the series, accept the suffering of existence and that only then would overcome the loneliness and not in instrumentality. The characters have learned and evolved are not without problems, but there is a growth there. Everything is sorrow to grow and overcome.
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Yui would not cause damage and suffering to Asuka and Shinji mainly to without having some greater goal in mind as the evolution and growth of shinji or the evolution of humanity. It would not cause it caused in Asuka and wounding shinji for the pleasure of making Asuka a whore. The suffering that shinji would serve to him to learn something and grow as a person or any end to the good of humanidade.O suffering caused shinji would learn from their mistakes, accumulating wisdom and evolving as a person, as well as becoming tougher difficulties .
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All that Asuka spent only serves to degrade it and to show how a whore who only knows how to relate sexually, no difficulty to do to make a better person that seeks to relate to people overcome their problems, become more open with their feelings. Yui just want to degrade and become a whore.
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What is the intention of the story is just trying to show Asuka being a slut and a degraded shinji weak. Fucking a girl and a boy banana watching passively for masturbation pleasures. But without a consistent plot.
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May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay here's what I don't get, is Musashi combination of the three stooges or Shinji's ideal self? He comes off as what Shinji thinks is "cool" or "manly" I understand Mana is Asuka's hate for herself but she also appears to be a combination of Rei and Asuka. Mana also appears to be a jab at fics where Asuka is overly sweet but her real self is particularly cruel.
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April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't really consider anything that Sadamoto writes to be of note worthy. Manga Evangelion with its horrible character depth and butchering the anime characters is almost as bad as Rebuild so yeah.