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I don't understand why Shinji's "Evil" side looks the way he does, I understand Asuka's but not Shinji's. Is it the way Shinji wants to look and act? I think he's just putting on a show to be honest.

I used to wonder if some of this stuff was ever done consentually in real life. Then I found queensnake, which makes some of this stuff seem tame in comparison. They stuff their pussies with conkers, thumb tacks, hot wax, and rocks, and shoot each other's pussies with BB guns and whip them with nettles, among other things. It's crazy.

This is the first time I've ever rage quit a fanfic. Coming from someone who's read a wide variety of rape and torture fics without feeling anything other than "meh", that is quite the achievement. I salute you.

Would you be willing to do a Japanese to English Translation comission?

Nice change of pace to go back to a relatively more relaxed time to break up the hardcore stuff. Extreme stuff followed by extreme stuff would only lessen the blow when something brutal happens, and it's great you're posting something like this to tide us over until the main story continues. It'll be great to get back onto Asuka adjusting to life pierced and I'm curious to see how you can hurt her nipples harder than that. I do agree with the other guy who suggested focusing on other characters. There's always Rei, and bringing Hikari into slavery would be awesome, especially considering the mental torture to Asuka it would bring.

The writing and legnth are all epic, but it's too much of the same thing. I find myself skimming through it to see if there's anything different, and then leaving disappointent when it's more of the same thing. I recommend doing something with Yui and Musashi, and perhaps Shinji coming home and hearing noises and then seeing his mother and Musashi screwing each other or something along the lines of the original. I've definitely had enough of reading about asuka in this story. Thanks for posting a new chapter anyway, but you need to do something different in this story.

Amazing as always, even though I prefer the more hardcore stuff

It was a really really good story until you started with shitting and similar disgusting stuff. Totally ruined it for me.

Are we likely to see more oral scat in later chapters? That part of Stage 08 was one of the hottest scenes in the story for me, and I'd love to see more of that in the future - especially if Asuka is 'fed' by multiple males. :)

Great chapter looking forward to a pregnant asuka