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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How about have asuka wear a device that keeps her clit hood back so that her clit is always exposed.
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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Do urethra insertion like a or straw or something
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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm kinda wondering how it would work to have a chapter focus on Rei. Sort of like a bonus chapter to give a different perspective on the story, to fill in some gaps and to add some variety
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December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like how the quality is consistent chapter to chapter. Shows a lot of discipline not to go crazy at the start and have no where to go but softer at the end. Is Mana going to go through with her earlier threat of piercing Asuka's nipples? That would be permanent physical and psychological damage. I think you've done well to create a villain that is a master of both sexual and mental torment.
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December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The destruction of Mana is a must. I want revenge for Asuka so badly here. This is insane. That plot bit at the beginning of the chap was interesting.
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November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that the end of chapter 9 doesn't mean another "Stockholm syndrome"-ending of the story, where Asuka with Musashi lived happily ever after. IMO, even Shinji growing a pair (or a set) of balls to the point of claiming Asuka and Rei for himself would be better than this.
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November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First let me commend you for writing such a long fic, but the same thing every chapter is getting kind of old. It's only been about Asuka getting abused, the original was about Yui and her debauchary. I'd like to see a translation of the original story, it wouldn't take very long to translate the whole story is about the length of 2 or 3 chapters of this version.
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March 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You should translate the original Innocent Taboo, Innocent Taboo Touji Kensuke and Innocent Taboo Short Shorts. Reading Asuka having sex in every chapter, even though well written it gets boring. Needs more Yui. I've been hoping someone would translate the originals for a while. I use Google Translate to read it and the stuff that makes sense to me is really hardcore.
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March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God... dear God...
This story is SO FUCKED UP!!!
Whoever can actually like what happens to Asuka is an abject sadist who should be locked away in a crazyhouse!
I'd SO kill Yui and Mana. SO FUCKING MUCH.
This story is SO FUCKED UP!!!
Whoever can actually like what happens to Asuka is an abject sadist who should be locked away in a crazyhouse!
I'd SO kill Yui and Mana. SO FUCKING MUCH.
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March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's kinda hard to work up any kind of sympathy for this OC when he was an unrepentant rapist for the majority of the fic. If he saw nothing wrong with constantly raping and blackmailing girls before this makes it hard to believe that he's really having second thoughts.