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for Consequences of the Maou\'s Heart

by Shinoga

person SP777
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #26....

FINALLY everyone knows about Wolfram! Now Yuri betta' come
wit' it and do something about it! *cracks knuckles*
person priscel
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope your home is ok. What a place to leave it and finally Gisela can speak!! But I wonder what happen to Wolfie and pervy sage...

*hugs ya*
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Just as you said finally Gisella spoke! >.<
Haleluya!!!!! I think i goint to make a short victory-dance....(Jishe lit a fire and dance alone around it...)
Mmmmm...i'm tired. Anyway, yeah! Againg yeah!
Things are starting to developt themselfs. To bad next chapter is goint to be when? Tomorrow? That'll be good...XD But imposible.
See you when i see you!
person priscel
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*hugs you* This really sucks, because I reviewed your story a while back as I was reading it and it seems none of it posted! My only regret is that this review will not be as in-dept or repeat all that I said before. -_- ... I tried checking FF.net and see if that was where I posted your reviews but they're not there either *pouts*

This is an awesome story and I fell in love with it right away. I just want Yuuri to hurry and realize that something is wrong with Wolf and seek him out. Shoot and I'm so proud of Celia cocking him one hehe for a strange moment I thought she was going to propose!!! the ending of ch. 24!! What a place to leave it!! *smiles* I hoped that perhaps it was Yuuri's powers reaching out to Wolf, but I'm just going to have to read the next chapter to see! ^_^ please keep writing!
person dana
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this. Particularly your portrayal of Wolfram and Murata and the relationship between Yuuri's two egos. Thank you :) This is on definetely on my continue to read list.
person priscel
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes! haha ^__^ it so sucks to end with a cliffie but oh well, what can one do but wait for the next chapter!

I was surprised, at first I thought Celi was coming on to Yuuri, but she's skillful in her misdirection. Even though Yuuri's in pain, I'm sure the degree he cares for others, despite his own physical condition, will kick in and he'll immediately focus on what Celi said, Wolfie's dying. Well unless he's unconscious... but he's split persona misses nothing.

And what's with that storm *arches brow* hmm I think, if what Celi's said is true and she chained Wolfram to Yuuri, then the storm is a backlash of power seeking Wolfram out?! yea.. long shot huh? ^_^ Sooo update soon! can't wait to read more!
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
kill you? no, just keep writing! I can't wait for more!
person Vraad
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A long wait for this update but worth every minute. "Crunch" down goes Yuri! I love it!
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Finally! Someone who knows and isn't lock by that stupid promise to Wolf!!!! Yeah!!! Jijiji, i really love that scene, specially because the second personality's coments...XD very nice to have a WISER voice in your head...althrough that doesn't keep away the creepy part...Oh! Poor nose! She didn't have the fault of belong to someone like Yuri!
In the other hand, Murata and Wolf...what the hell now?! T-T
Hope to see you soon; it's getting better with each chapter!!!
person priscel
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
grrr... I just lost my whole review... *sighs* Anyways I'm enjoying the story and was wonder why Conrad's name is spell differently when Yuri says it? I'm at Chap 10 so far and I'm loving it! I especially loved have Yuri tripped and ended the engagement that way - it was perfect and just like something that would happen if happened in the series. ^_^ Happy Holidays ahaha and I'm still reading!

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