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for Consequences of the Maou\'s Heart

by Shinoga

schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved! Is so sad and so good. please continue.
person jen
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Wolfram! At first I thought Yuri was really stupid but as the story progresses I can understand him and his motivations much better. Besides he surely would change his mind if only he knew the consequences. -- A good plot and well written. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person SP777
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #19...

Awww...I just getting into this, after being months away, then realized
there were no more chapters to click. :-[

So...any hope in us getting the satisfaction of seeing Yuuri getting his
butt kicked for putting Wolfram in this situation? ^_^
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How cool, this is so awesome. I really like how much in character you've kept everyone! I always wondered how Yuri and Wolfram's relationship would pan out. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. BTW i was just wondering isnt it Conrad, not Conrat? Thanks for sharing with us!!
person roro237
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes I loved it! This chapter did have every emotion:) I hoped and thought maybe Yuri would say the magic words after that incredible dream. But he's not ready yet. The wimp! ^_^
person anon
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... just wow.....
person Nevyn
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I really like this story and it is one of the few stories that i am following regularly. I just hope that you update it soon and complete the story.

Thanks
N
person aionwatha
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic was a pleasant surprise. At first, I feared it was going to be horribly cliche and sappy, yet it shied away from the obviously plots and was well in touch with the series. I was actually sad to see I had reached the end of what was written. I hardly ever read long fics anymore yet those 18 chapters kept me reading far longer than I thought I would.

I hope we can see more of it soon.
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cute. I was desesperated looking for a new chapter. Please continue the tale
person SP777
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
abouit #15 & 16...

Well, for what it's worth, I say good job on what you've written thus far.

I, particularly, liked 16, but I have to wonder how long it will be until
Yuri finds out the truth about Wolfram...and when will he ''open his eyes''?

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