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for Consequences of the Maou\'s Heart

by Shinoga

person roro237
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much:) I think you have capture everyones character so well. I'm feeling so sorry for Wolf. I hope Yuri realizes what he's doing soon! Hey! I'm here to the end ^_^
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The encaunter with the Yuri and Wolfram is very strong and realistic. For some reason Yuri didn't see so loving and cute.
person SP777
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it possible that one day, we could get a chapter based on Yuuri's POV,
so we can see how he really feels, regarding Wolfram and possibly if he
COULD love him.
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Strong chapter. I really like the troble and conflicted Wolf. Please continue
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yurri with their emotions. I really liked what we bring the dispute through your imagination. Besides the sadness of separation. Please continue the story
person Catalisya
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Keep it up!
person ycrmn
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting. I mean, most stories out there revolve around the same theme of Yuuri breaking off the engagement and Wolfram just becomes angsty & broken hearted. But your story has a greater impact with Wolfram's life on the line. And your style of writing is very smooth and credible all the way.
Hope to see more updates from you.
Yay Yuuram. XD
person roro237
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I think you have capture everyones character:) And the sexy-ness between G & G:) I love it all the great story line. You brought a big smile to my face at Yuri desk dream! I also think he's in love with Wolfram and can't see it. I'm looking forward to read what else you have in mind! I'm loven it ^_^
person Raelyn
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just ran into this story and I really am enjoying it. Hope to see more updates soon.
I nearly cried at several points and I love the thoughtful Wolfram, though Yuri is getting annoying and for the first time, I wouldn't mind if he completely lost Wolfram to someone else, like Murata, and Yuri was miserable for the rest of his life. Stupid Yuri. But I know that probably won't happen cause Yuuram is one of the cutest pairings out there. Oh well. ^_^
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like Glendal and Gunter sex part. Please continue

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