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This would make a really good start for a multiple-part story. But as it stands, it's definitely a good one-shot. There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing overly distracting. I think you got Faye pretty close to her canon personality, though honestly I'm not that good at finding her voice myself. Either way, a good read. :D

I really think you have a good start here...it works as a one-shot if you left it, but I think you could keep the ball rolling. I only saw minor spelling issues. Hope to see more. Good job