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This story is such a breath of fresh air and I can not thank you enough for sharing it. It hits on so many of my personal poisons and I just hope that you continue to write this wonderful piece. This is definitely one of the few fanfictions in any fandom that I will reread simply for the joy of it. Thank you thank you thank you!

You left it there?! Noooo. I want to know what happens next. I neeed to know. I am literally flailing with curiosity right now because this fic is so well written that I just want to keep reading it. I love your Lelouch and Suzaku. They are so well written. Please more soon!

FFFFFFFUUUUUU- this was more than I could have hoped for in a second chapter. I'm so relieved that you didn't drop the ball, and in fact I apologize that the thought ever crossed my mind. You are amazing at this. There are so many reasons that I love this chapter. Should I try to list them all? I'll go in reverse.

Lelouch's love for Suzaku. OMG, I'm not the only one these days who believes in such a thing as platonic love? Of course I can't wait for those two to start fucking like bunnies, but pop culture is saturated with romantic love, so I no longer find it as exciting nor touching as I think I'm expected to. You might be surprised to know how many people I have spoken to who are confused by the idea of loving another person who they are not close to or do not know well, especially in a non-sexual way. Seeing my current favorite pairing engaged in such a relationship is delightful.

I'm happy that we finally get to learn what's been eating Suzaku. Seeing a bit of Lelouch's past was a treat, too.

Bradley being gay. I giggled. Ditto for Nunnally dating Rolo. Too much fun.

Can't forget to mention the sex. Tasteful, and intruigingly non-linear. Although I (perhaps unreasonably) dislike Schneizel, so far I am pleased with his role in the story, and am interested to see where it leads.

Suzaku OD-ing on the sleeping pills was so clever. It's good to see a writer with such tight control of their own story.

I can't remember the last time I had so much fun reading a fanfiction. How long are you thinking this will be, anyway? Your next update can't come soon enough for me, but of course I wouldn't want you to rush things. Just don't leave me hanging; a story this finely crafted cannot be left unfinished!

Oh my word wow! That was just stunning and totally broke my heart. Lelouch is such a complex and interesting character and I just loved that insight into him. And Suzaku **wibbles** poor mistreated boy, I can understand the need to hug him tight. Really really well written and am looking forward to more.

I admit I was intrigued when I saw the incest warning for the first chapter and was wondering what that entailed. I do like Schneizel/Lelouch and the fact that *both* Suzaku and Lelouch are damaged survivors of abuse in this fic made it very interesting indeed. I liked how you portrayed Lelouch's attempts at connecting with someone. Some typos but otherwise a great chapter!

This is wonderful. I'm sorry I don't have anything constructive to say, but it's absolutely wonderful. Really. I normally don't like AUs, and I almost passed by this one, but I'm so glad I decided to read it. I can't wait to read more.

errgghhh when Lelouch was holding Suzaku as he was crying, I thought I was going to start crying, too. It killed me. In a good way.

Normally I would leave a review that consists of my thoughts on what I've read but every so often I'll come across a story that kills my brain. That said, MOAR PLZ.

This fanfiction is just amazing, really D: I enjoyed this chapter far beyond words and was completely captivated by not only the expert and very interesting portrayals of Suzaku and Lelouch's personalities in this AU setting, but the AU setting itself has left me very intrigued. I honestly never would have thought of them in these professions, but the way you've set it up is really a joy to read about. I love the tension I can really feel between them, or more like, that Suzaku feels towards Lelouch XD A major problem that I find with AUs is that they fail to maintain the depth of the histories and personalities of the characters. Even in fanfiction that uses the same exact storyline, a lot of it can be shallow and tends to completely miss all the little quirks of the characters, all the unspoken parts that say far more than what's actually said.

n__n; I'm sorry if my gushing makes you feel a bit awkward. I sincerely enjoyed this first chapter very much, so much so that while I usually don't review, I was almost desperate to give you one and let you know just how much I'll be looking forward to the next installment. I really want to see where it goes. I suppose I've been a bit dissatisfied with the majority of the Code Geass fanfiction, so it's wonderful to find one I really enjoy~ It wasn't stated in your summary, but I was hoping that eventually Lelouch and Suzaku would have something of a relationship? While I am a complete pervert (why else would I browse this site, hm~?) when I'm so interested in the story itself I can do without the physical intimacy (although it's still loved, don't get me wrong). But I think that a relationship, whether you write out the physical portion or not, would be electric between them with the way you've set it up. I would really enjoy it~

Of course I'll still probably diligently and eagerly keep up with your chapters even if they don't get together. It would just be a lovely bonus if they did =P I'll stop going on now, and close this off by wishing you luck on this story. I really look forward to reading more and eagerly await your next chapter. :3

I have to say, wow. The story really hooked me up, the characters were amazing, reading Lelouch&Suzaku interaction was like watching an intense tennis game, with them passing the ball back and forth. You make it seem like a psychiatrist is really Lelouch's vocation, and maybe it is^ how he just loves to mess with others' heads. Maybe it makes me a pervert, but I think he's sexy as hell when he plays his little mind games. And Suzaku is, well, Suzaku. I don't know who I love more. Both of them, together. ^_^
Inc on the story stands for Incest, is it between Suzaku and his father? Or Lelouch and...? Well, he does seem to have an older brother complex in the series...
I wonder if you are going to somehow fit Lelouch's royal lienage into the story, or Lamperouge is his real name here? Just curious.
I really hope Suzaku didn't poison himself with those pills. All in all, the story is great, will look forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Code Geass isn't normally a section that I wander into but this fic caught my eye on the homepage of recently updates fics. And boy am I glad that it did. This looks like it is going to be a really good story and I am looking forward to seeing where you are going with it. Your characterization of both Suzaku and Lelouch (being lazy on the names lol) is beautifuly done and I loved the way that their conversations twisted and turned both trying to get something from the other.

I'm going to have to make a mental note to check the Code Geass section more often so that I don't miss this! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.