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for Primary Gain

by anlaaria

person Masks
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Phwooh! THAT was quite a read, my friend. Heavy stuff indeed. You're... very smart, aren't you? This story is significantly more complex than... pretty much every fanfiction I can remember reading. Generally, when it comes to porn, I am guilty of skipping to the "good part", so to speak. Before I could even look for that in your fic, I found myself pulled into the story, and I read it word-for-word from beginning to end. "Interesting" doesn't begin to cover it.

I am eagerly awaiting your next update. Such a carefully constructed story is very rare. You've made a fan out of me.
person Double
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great start for a story. I like the idea that they are in the FBI. It looks like it going to be an interesting fic. Looking forward to your next update.
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'd like to let you know how much I love this AU. Although Lelouch's characterization is still a bit generic (I think that's understandable, considering he is playing a role), Suzaku's characterization is already very clear and awesome. I really enjoy how freely you are writing this, keeping the characters true to themselves in spite of the completely different scenario. This is probably one of the most original CG fics I've read in a long time. The story and the focus on the characters's relationship is extremely gripping and I was actually sorry when the chapter was over. In other words, I want more. Much more. And I will be waiting for your update and cry tears of pain if you give up on this project.I love your ironic, fast style. I also love how you show more than you tell, and the original take on the whole cg universe.

Congratulations. And please, do continue. :)

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