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by KittyNeko

person Fluffy_lover
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was very funny to read, I lol'ed hard at the "Oh shit" part with Sakura's brother. I usually don't like OOC fics but you managed to make it quite pleasant, I had a really nice time reading this.

Thank you, I was feeling down because of some bad results at uni but this really lifted my spirit.
person L0VER
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, that was so cuteee!! and i love the nice long chapters. great story, i hope you start another one:) and update Natsu soooonn tooo, please,.
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story, very nice indeed. One thing though, if you're posting it here at AFF.net, shouldn't there be a, you know, sex scene somewhere? Laters.
person klv
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I cracked up soooooo much while reading this! I even had to take a break just so I could run to my room, shut the door, and laugh myself out where none of my family would ask what was wrong. No lie, either. If, when I click on your name, I find that you have other stories in your arsenal, I shall be extatic. This was brilliant!! I never thought one could get so many hysterical situations out of such a problem, but I should have with two such sassy emotional people. You have a great mind!
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it! thanks for writing!

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