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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really lazy right now so this is going to be my shortest yet, so forgive me. I am really liking how the third and final book has started, it has already has me hooked and wanting more, so with that said til the next chapter.*smiles*
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your stories never disappoint.
So happy everyone are coming into their own-especially Yousi. In the TR books was always saddened that Jupiter reduced him from a brilliant blonde to a nitwit, afraid of his own shadow.
Wonder what Bastion has in store for Iason if he decides to try and capture him. Bet he'll get a painfull surprise since he doesn't know about Iason's power. Will have to wait and see.
So happy everyone are coming into their own-especially Yousi. In the TR books was always saddened that Jupiter reduced him from a brilliant blonde to a nitwit, afraid of his own shadow.
Wonder what Bastion has in store for Iason if he decides to try and capture him. Bet he'll get a painfull surprise since he doesn't know about Iason's power. Will have to wait and see.
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jajajajajaja!!! That was the best!!! Kai is so funny saying that about the two corners...
Any way, the end was great and you leave us like...OMG! What next!!!
Any way, the end was great and you leave us like...OMG! What next!!!
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so you've re posted chapter 1 with the missing bit, and at this stage chapter 2 is yet to appear, so my original review has vanished as well.
So just to restate, a great beginning to the third part of this arc. Forgetting the action, its the side stories that I am looking forward to. . .And with the addition of the missing part, it further confirms my view on Raoul, Yui, and Kai. (Even the good doctor is worried that he wouldn't be Yousi's lover in the past, so how much worse is it for Yui. . .even though he is trying to live with it) And now I'm more convinced that Kai is going to be a problem, because you've convinced me that even though he loves Raiman, the friendship part is of greater value than the love aspect. . .
I will look forward to Raoul's awakening with trepidation as well as excitment. . .(will he even remember Yui at all at that moment?)
Thank you for a story that has caught my imagination so completely..
So just to restate, a great beginning to the third part of this arc. Forgetting the action, its the side stories that I am looking forward to. . .And with the addition of the missing part, it further confirms my view on Raoul, Yui, and Kai. (Even the good doctor is worried that he wouldn't be Yousi's lover in the past, so how much worse is it for Yui. . .even though he is trying to live with it) And now I'm more convinced that Kai is going to be a problem, because you've convinced me that even though he loves Raiman, the friendship part is of greater value than the love aspect. . .
I will look forward to Raoul's awakening with trepidation as well as excitment. . .(will he even remember Yui at all at that moment?)
Thank you for a story that has caught my imagination so completely..
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack!! Sorry Barrie18 and anyone else who saw the story do a Houdini! *Humbly bows. Hey! No tossing vegetables!* I was having technical difficulties...like putting a round ball in a square hole... The squirrels have taken over, so be kind. I hope to make it up to you by posting Part 2 as promised.
Thanx!
untamedlady
-faints-
Thanx!
untamedlady
-faints-