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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Your grammar needs to be improved a lot and the characters are ooc, but I enjoy reading these kinds of fic and I'm happy to suspend disbelief for it.
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm sad that Hakkai is going to have two lovers instead of just one. don't get me wrong, nothing says good lovin like a bite to the neck. i personally thought that Goujun who has been there from day one should be Hakkai one and only love. anyway, i love your story and will continue to read it till the very end. thanks for the great reading!!
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Question? Can he claim me too, I'm willing...please.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
story was great, very hot, just became a little confused when he as the friends to watch over him and then send them away. He said he was a healer so why did he not stay the first time?
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. XD I want him to claim Hakkai and NOW! XD Thanks for this chapter! I'm waiting for the next one. :)
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More, more, please more! I want to know what happens next! XD
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO HAKKAI IS TO BE THIS PERSONS CHOICE TO BREAK UP THE IKKOU? AND WILL SANZO AND THE OTHERS SAVE HIM BEFORE IT'S TO LATE? LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER ON THIS VERY INTRIQUING STORY.