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September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I finished the whole story in two days, and needless to say, I LOVE it!! It's amazing how spot-on the characterizations are--like, it really feels like this could have happened in the actual story itself. I found it interesting how well you managed to write Raoul and Guy's dynamic, as well, despite having very little to go off of. This is definitely one of my favorite AnK fanfics of all time.
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January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thank you for sending me the link to this amazing story :)
i can just picture it, riki shouting katzes name out while been taken by iason! lol
i can just picture it, riki shouting katzes name out while been taken by iason! lol
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are a fantastic writer - this was wonderful~! Story and characterizations were delicious. Smut was sooooo nice. Thanks. :)
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah! I love this chapter and beginning to love this story itself more and more. ^^ I love Riki in this chapter. XD
I like how you connected this story with the original plot. ^^
I like how you connected this story with the original plot. ^^
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Up until this chapter, the plot is really good, smooth. One thing I don't like about is how Riki behaved to be submissive in some of the chapters. despite that, I love the story flow. Keep it up.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hai there!!! Thanks for the epilogue. I also thought the same or al least i ask myself if you wouldn't write one...thanks God (and Barrie 18) for it!!!
Nice ending for this amazing fic. Maybe...the lemon part was missing (jiji) but the were so cute with each other, that it really doesn't matter.
See you soon!!!
Nice ending for this amazing fic. Maybe...the lemon part was missing (jiji) but the were so cute with each other, that it really doesn't matter.
See you soon!!!
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for giving us all a look in the future to see how 'happy' everyone is. It was really a lovely epilogue, which had a nice twist at the end for Katze, and Riki a chance to mouth off in his own mongrel way XD
I know I was smiling, and I'm sure the others who followed this story also had big grins on their faces.
Thanks again.
I know I was smiling, and I'm sure the others who followed this story also had big grins on their faces.
Thanks again.
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to hear that you're fine. .
To the 'last' chapter. ..
I have to admit I'm shocked that it is the last chapter, as I really thought there was more to go, but hey its your story. . have fun with it.
As to the chapter itself, well it came out completely from left field, so yes you did surprise me in the end :)
I think you tried to show that Guy felt something for Raoul by protecting him from Jupiter so to speak, but it was a very quick moment and even though they were their on the spot they really didn't play a role in the end and it was very easy to forget that they were even there.
Jupiter's revelations was a highlight though. . although I've never understood the concept of 'androids' as artificial humans, it was a nice touch that they were all human, based on a dead lover (how tragically romantic. ..mind you she was and is a bitch to the end) and that Riki was an experiment gone wrong.
Of course Katze turning out to be an Elite scientist was a shock. . .but with a name like Rogue.. what else can you expect. . . rofl absolute genius there.
As to the ending, I agree with you. . . a story should end with an "I love you". . . but I think you cut the ending very abruptly.
It was just a quick I love you and a kiss (like the way you took canon again and made it the 'first' deep kiss unlike the 'last' one we all look cross eyed at.
However, it might be an idea, just to tag on an epilogue a couple of months down the track, just to hear how things have developed on Amoi without Jupiter and of course to have a more indepth look into what has happened with our 2 couples and one ex Furniture.
But whatever you do. . . just know I enjoyed going on this adventure with you :)
To the 'last' chapter. ..
I have to admit I'm shocked that it is the last chapter, as I really thought there was more to go, but hey its your story. . have fun with it.
As to the chapter itself, well it came out completely from left field, so yes you did surprise me in the end :)
I think you tried to show that Guy felt something for Raoul by protecting him from Jupiter so to speak, but it was a very quick moment and even though they were their on the spot they really didn't play a role in the end and it was very easy to forget that they were even there.
Jupiter's revelations was a highlight though. . although I've never understood the concept of 'androids' as artificial humans, it was a nice touch that they were all human, based on a dead lover (how tragically romantic. ..mind you she was and is a bitch to the end) and that Riki was an experiment gone wrong.
Of course Katze turning out to be an Elite scientist was a shock. . .but with a name like Rogue.. what else can you expect. . . rofl absolute genius there.
As to the ending, I agree with you. . . a story should end with an "I love you". . . but I think you cut the ending very abruptly.
It was just a quick I love you and a kiss (like the way you took canon again and made it the 'first' deep kiss unlike the 'last' one we all look cross eyed at.
However, it might be an idea, just to tag on an epilogue a couple of months down the track, just to hear how things have developed on Amoi without Jupiter and of course to have a more indepth look into what has happened with our 2 couples and one ex Furniture.
But whatever you do. . . just know I enjoyed going on this adventure with you :)
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TT-TT It's over, i can't believe it!!! It was so...suddent....T-T...it's over....
The ending was...unexpected i should say. It will never ocurred to me all that about jupiter's love, and riki, and katze...Maybe that's why you take a lot of time writing this last chapter (i almost get nuts waiting for this!!!)
I like it. Maybe i'm a little sad because like i already say it was to quickly and sudden, but it's was a nice and very romantic and...tender (in certain way) ending, specially because my Raould was happy!!!!! XD
The most "liking" part for me, was that Riki turns out to be the "bad-cool gay of the movie"!!!! Buajajajajajajjajajaajaja (evil laugh), that was the best!!!!
So, in the end: Your fic was a great and interesting fic. The history had a lot of content and the relationships between the characters, the complexity of the feelings...all made it just unforgetable!
Congrats!!!!!
See you latter!!!!
The ending was...unexpected i should say. It will never ocurred to me all that about jupiter's love, and riki, and katze...Maybe that's why you take a lot of time writing this last chapter (i almost get nuts waiting for this!!!)
I like it. Maybe i'm a little sad because like i already say it was to quickly and sudden, but it's was a nice and very romantic and...tender (in certain way) ending, specially because my Raould was happy!!!!! XD
The most "liking" part for me, was that Riki turns out to be the "bad-cool gay of the movie"!!!! Buajajajajajajjajajaajaja (evil laugh), that was the best!!!!
So, in the end: Your fic was a great and interesting fic. The history had a lot of content and the relationships between the characters, the complexity of the feelings...all made it just unforgetable!
Congrats!!!!!
See you latter!!!!
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't know if you'll ever see this, but you've spoiled us all with your constant updates and now that you've 'disappeared' I'm just dropping this line (because I can't work out any other way to reach you, and I've gone into 'mother' mode) to hope that you are alright and that the only reason you haven't updated is because you are having a wonderful time doing something and enjoying yourself completely.