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Hello there! As you say, i like the chapter, specially because of my favorite couple, mean RAOUL and Guy...jijiji, interprete that.
The "voice" al alone and calling...that's Jupiter, right? It's the only one who comes to my mind, so i just suppose she feels alone because her blondies get "kidnaped" (I put that on "..." because at this time of the game, they are ovbliously very happy of the situation XD ).
To bad you just show one of the many couples form by Blondie+Mongrel...yea, i know. Showing them all, will be to much of a pain in the ass or just, to long...but...OMG!!! Just imagine all that sexy couples together....(nose bleed....)...cof, cof...sorry...
Againg with my favorite guy...Raoul. I'm happy, because he is happy :P He deserve it!
And...i don't know what else to write...i'm watching tv...jiji. Bye!!!

Oh Hespera, what can I say. ... Iason and Riki are just so. .. volatile. .. will they ever have a kind word to say to each other, and get past all the tough guy 'shit' and say how they really feel. . .(they do show it in the bed, but sometimes things have to be said out loud)

As to Raoul and Guy, I loved that bit and Guy's explanation. It still leaves the big question. . .. but you can sense that at least for the moment they are growing in 'some' direction. It really will be a question of not whether Guy is in love with Riki or Raoul, but who comes first in his heart.. . .

As to the seduced Blondies. . . . I'm going to throw a few questions at you, do what you want with them.

We know that Raoul and Iason were lovers, Iason is 'shocked' at what the Blondies are now doing (rather do as I say not as I do eh?) but surely there must have been other deviant Blondies out there, that no one knew about?

And no matter how clever mongrels are with sex, . . seduction can work both ways.. . .So is there a Blondie who can play the game in reverse and 'rescuse Jupiter' and destroy the rebelllion?

Evil thoughts I know, sorry, can't help it :)

As to Katze, once again I love the way you played on your knowledge of the books. ..because I don't think many realize where "Furniture come from"

looking forward to the next chapter. . .

Hai!!! I still have work but not so much...and you publish the new chapter so quickly! I'll always love you for that! (The fastes writer on the west)
Nice chapter...dirty (PxY)...sweet (RxI) and...funny? The fact that Raould is mad with Guy isn't funny but the part of "Iason's help" to Guy, who by the way it's really dense, that was funny...he just sound like a mother taking care of her child...XD
Other thing...so they are really thinking of taking down Jupiter?Mmmmmm, or maybe something else...I don't know. At this time of the day my brain just won't work right...it's dead...poor brain, poor brain... (as you can see i'm going nut sooooooo...see you soon!!!!)

:)

All's fair in Love and War, and I would say that whatever is taking place between Yani and Pelias is happening behind the other closed doors in Dana Bahn between the mongrels and their Blondie captives. Jupiter really wasn't too smart in making sure her Blondies were so sexually innocent in that respect. Really the oldest trick in the book :)

As to our boys. . . well Iason might not be able to say the "L" word, but by working along side Riki to overthrow Jupiter is taramount to shouting it out loud in a public forum.

As to Guy and Raoul. . . ooooh. . .I like the fact that Iason told Guy the truth, and I'm sure that in Blondie terms he was saying it very straight forward (ie he fucked you, you fucked him) but Guy really doesn't get the fact that Raoul gave him power over him by letting him do the 'fucking'.

As to Iason still being jealous over Guy I can understand that because no one (including Guy) knows what he is really feeling at this stage.

Guy might now think it is because he broke his promise to Raoul about hurting Iason, but its probably more Raoul's interpretation of the events. Raoul doesn't know that Guy didn't know until afterwards who he actually shot. As far as Raoul is concerned Guy shot Iason to get Riki out of there. And Guy thinking his shot was deadly allowed Riki to ring Katze to appease Riki.

So these two have alot to disucss before they come to an understanding. But even then, I still think other events have to take place for Raoul to really believe that Guy loves him.

But who is the mysterious contact helping the rebels? It would really be sneaky of you if it was someone who we haven't met with yet. So my guess is its either Jupiter, setting a trap, because I can't believe she is sitting there as hopeless as they think she is. I'm sure she must have a back up disc somewhere that keeps her going until her blondies or new administrators come into being.

Or it's Katze. Always delving and finding out things he shouldn't, computer savey and from what I've seen so far, happy to help Iason and Riki when he can.

Looking forward to where your mind goes next :)

Hi there! Last time i wrote one review for two chapter and that was bad, you deserve ono for one, so here it goes.
Chapter 28: OMG!!! Riki and Guy are nuts!!! How the hell are tehy going to tanagura and kidnap "the important blondies" including iason ans raoul?!!! He was right (Raoul) Jupiter will get nuts!!! Anyway...if the kipnap them for making their fantasies true, i support them!!! Because that are my fantasies too!!!
What are they planing as a total picture, i have not the tinny clue...really....or maybe is my dream come true: Destroy Jupiter and all her bullshit!!!! (Sorry the bad words...jiijiji)
Next chapter!!!!

Sorry for the late, i had to work....T-T
I just read the last chapter...OMG! That was intense...in a sexual way. I see how the thing are moving...like they want to "inverse" de society or maybe just stop the crazy Jupiter and star a new society were they will be the same or something....i like the idea of Blondies-pets...jajajajajajajajajajaja!!! But eventually, that will end bad just, because it's foundation in slavery.
It doesn't matter, i0ll just wait to see what are you planing and enjoy it.
The other couple (i'm sorry i didn't learn their names) jijiji, i see the future and see a lot of sex!!!! Buajajajajajajaja (evil laugh)...Riki and Iason...they where already in it (good for them!) and Guy and Raoul...definitively good things don't last for ever and their problems start. Will be good if Guy just say "i love you"...hard because he doesn't know it...
See you soon!!! (more like read you soon?)

First of all, sorry for my silence over the past week or so. I been reading along but haven't had a chance to comment. Now on to the comments!! *bangs head against a wall* The suspense is killing me!! I don't whether to cry, cheer, scream, laugh, or jump off my roof of my house!!! Any hints on is going to happen. I got some ideas, but it is likely not to happen. (can't predict the future with you.) Anyways, keep it up!

Hi. I just found this story and read all your chapters. It's really good and I'm enjoying it very much! Oh dear, I just can't wait for what is to come next! It's exciting and something I couldn't stop reading. Especially how you left certain chapters at such cliffhangers. I wanted to kill you till I realized there was the next chapter. hehe.. You're awesome! And.. the whole banter between Iason and Riki is just plain sexy. lol.. I hope you keep writing and update soon! I can't wait! :D

::in very small voice:: sorry, really very happy. . . love the thought you've given all this and the character development. .

enjoyed this chapter. . .very much....I like the idea of seducing the Blondies to get them on side. And since most Blondies here don't seem to be 'deviants' like our favorite two, I'm sure they'll come on side quickly.

As to our couples. .. rofl. . Well Riki and Iason are just being Riki and Iason. seems they've come to understand each other.

As to Raoul and Guy. . . like the idea of Raoul losing it. Now does Guy go to Riki for advice on what's wrong with his Blondie? Or will Iason be the voice of reason and tell him what the 'real' problem is?

till the next update :)

Yes, quite surprised by the turn of events, burt all it does is raise more questions and thoughts. .

Forgive me, and I'm probably reading this all wrong, but I still get the feeling that Guy is 'settling' for Raoul. It's only now that he has been completely rejected by Riki that his thoughts turn exclusively to Raoul, a safe haven where he knew he was loved. Rather like when Riki turned to him as a pairing partner and he gave Riki that same security. He may have taken the 'pet' ring as a remembrance, and perhaps it is now meaning more, but still, until I see him put Raoul in front of Riki in his life, I (and probably Raoul too) will always have his doubts.

As to the kidnapping, well what are the Rebels trying to do? Equal Rights, Citizenship? Destruction of Jupiter? So far all we've heard of is damage done, but not the reason for the fighting.

As to Jupiter, she is not an idiot. She knows it is the mongrels who are behind this. She must have discovered by this time that Riki is no longer in the brothel, I can't imagine she would let him out of her sight so easily especially since he has that perfect DNA. So why hasn't she acted yet?

Ok so Raoul and Iason have been taken, but once again, Jupiter isn't too happy with Raoul, and surely she must be looking very cross eyed at Iason at this moment. Because without knowing the 'facts's' she can compute quite logically (and wrongly) that both Blondies were involved with this kidnapping and are now joining up with their lovers against her orders.

So what is to prevent her in saying, well he may have been my favorite 'son', but this is a bit too much. I'll just rid myself of those two, get out their genetic makeup again and re create them. Only this time I'll make sure to tweak out that deviant streak they both seem to have. End of story.

Love what you are doing, extremely curious to where you go next. Keeping my fingers crossed for that 'happy ending'