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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!!! This chapter was nice, because it had so many changes in the scenes and a lot of stuff happen.
I really didn't understant the thing with Riki being "pure bread", sorry. But the end of that part was just so fun...Iason is really fun...sometimes...
Raoul ...i just keep thinking he is sweet...ok, he actually hit Guy and i didn't like it...but when he became just so concerned with what Jupiter might do and all that satatus stuff...T-T...poor of him..or maybe i'm just one of that girls that justify violence and THAT WILL BE A PROBLEM!!! @-@'''
Anyway, the last part at the car..i don't know just how you mke the most exciting scenes in one parraghrap..i mean...>///< !!!! By the way i whish a could see riki with just a top and a tank...no way, what about Iason in a top and a tank....................sorry....my nose is bleeding again...see ya....................
I really didn't understant the thing with Riki being "pure bread", sorry. But the end of that part was just so fun...Iason is really fun...sometimes...
Raoul ...i just keep thinking he is sweet...ok, he actually hit Guy and i didn't like it...but when he became just so concerned with what Jupiter might do and all that satatus stuff...T-T...poor of him..or maybe i'm just one of that girls that justify violence and THAT WILL BE A PROBLEM!!! @-@'''
Anyway, the last part at the car..i don't know just how you mke the most exciting scenes in one parraghrap..i mean...>///< !!!! By the way i whish a could see riki with just a top and a tank...no way, what about Iason in a top and a tank....................sorry....my nose is bleeding again...see ya....................
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It amazes me that someone who is the Head of the Syndicate, and has to deal with people and situations on a full time basis, in his private life doesn't have a clue what to do with Riki.
And Riki, in pure mongrel mode, doesn't see what is right in front of his face.
He accuses Iason of not having emotions, and yet Iason's actions belie that.
Totally different to Raoul and Guy eh? :)
So Riki is in the notorious ring, and Iason is having fun playing with the controls. Yet if that is what he wanted in the first place, why bother to 'fix' Riki. He could have just slapped a ring on, and pushed the button to get the desired reponse. The man really does have problems doesn't he?
So now to the next part of the puzzle. . . I doubt if Guy is given a ring that it will be one NOT fitted to his 'cock'.
So do Guy and Riki meet up in Eos in one of the salons? Does Guy 'lose' it when he discovers where Riki's ring is located. And once again the question that I keep asking, do all trails lead to Dana Bahn?
Powerful chapter, with the Iason & Riki jumping off the page.
Waiting impatiently for the next update :)
And Riki, in pure mongrel mode, doesn't see what is right in front of his face.
He accuses Iason of not having emotions, and yet Iason's actions belie that.
Totally different to Raoul and Guy eh? :)
So Riki is in the notorious ring, and Iason is having fun playing with the controls. Yet if that is what he wanted in the first place, why bother to 'fix' Riki. He could have just slapped a ring on, and pushed the button to get the desired reponse. The man really does have problems doesn't he?
So now to the next part of the puzzle. . . I doubt if Guy is given a ring that it will be one NOT fitted to his 'cock'.
So do Guy and Riki meet up in Eos in one of the salons? Does Guy 'lose' it when he discovers where Riki's ring is located. And once again the question that I keep asking, do all trails lead to Dana Bahn?
Powerful chapter, with the Iason & Riki jumping off the page.
Waiting impatiently for the next update :)
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there. Finally and last...the evil ring makes his apperance....buajajajajjajajajja (evil laugh) No way, just kiding.
Now, talking seriously, that's something everybody kwnos from the original Ovas...the ring...the one wich plays and important part at the ending...only remembering gaves me the creepsssss!!!! @-@'''
More importanly, Riki it pulling some serious treads at Iason...when will come the day when he finally explote and actually found and tell riki that he loves him? I hope soon, but of course that just my desire..afeter all is your fic and more important it's an Ai No Kusabi fic...that always end bad..TT_TT...but if you want a happy ending i support you...jiji
See you soon!!!s
Now, talking seriously, that's something everybody kwnos from the original Ovas...the ring...the one wich plays and important part at the ending...only remembering gaves me the creepsssss!!!! @-@'''
More importanly, Riki it pulling some serious treads at Iason...when will come the day when he finally explote and actually found and tell riki that he loves him? I hope soon, but of course that just my desire..afeter all is your fic and more important it's an Ai No Kusabi fic...that always end bad..TT_TT...but if you want a happy ending i support you...jiji
See you soon!!!s
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE RAOUL!!! HE IS THE BEST!!!! SO CUTE!!!
Very funny the thing with the bike..so he just wanted to get a ride? Ok, i understand that.
The 2 idiots in the jail...they should be castrated and let see if they like it, dam stupids!!!
I kind of feel like that "the ending" with Raoul and Gyr, of course the history goes on but..well..it's like they get to an undestanding point between them and...the rest it just been happy...and have lots of sex of course!!!! XD
Ah well...that just an idea, more like a feeling of mine...
Iason and Riki...well, that's another totally different case and let's see how goes on in your next chapter, which i hope will be out soon!!! Please!!!
Very funny the thing with the bike..so he just wanted to get a ride? Ok, i understand that.
The 2 idiots in the jail...they should be castrated and let see if they like it, dam stupids!!!
I kind of feel like that "the ending" with Raoul and Gyr, of course the history goes on but..well..it's like they get to an undestanding point between them and...the rest it just been happy...and have lots of sex of course!!!! XD
Ah well...that just an idea, more like a feeling of mine...
Iason and Riki...well, that's another totally different case and let's see how goes on in your next chapter, which i hope will be out soon!!! Please!!!
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a surprise. . . I didn't think that Raoul and Guy's situation would be so swiftly solved. But will Guy be happy to settle for pet status? Even though Raoul has said he loves him?
And I have to admit I'm more curious as to what is going on between Riki and Iason. I can't see that easy a solution for them.
And there still has to be some sort of resolution between Guy and Riki. And even Raoul and Iason need to sit down and talk about what has happened because of the Mongrels they let in their lives.
Hope to see an update soon.
And I have to admit I'm more curious as to what is going on between Riki and Iason. I can't see that easy a solution for them.
And there still has to be some sort of resolution between Guy and Riki. And even Raoul and Iason need to sit down and talk about what has happened because of the Mongrels they let in their lives.
Hope to see an update soon.
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What the hell does it means: "Gay was gone"? WHERE???!!!!!! OMG...what if something happen to him...ok, let be real...the most realistic idea: he left...but why would he leave such a gorgeous man!!! I wouldn't!!!
That ending was the best in all your chapters so far...i mean...i'm gona eat my fingernails...and my fingers also if you don't continue soon!!! PLEASE!!!!
That ending was the best in all your chapters so far...i mean...i'm gona eat my fingernails...and my fingers also if you don't continue soon!!! PLEASE!!!!
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't think Guy has gone out to surprise Raoul by buying breakfast :)
Yes, it was short and sweet, but still moves the plot along :)
So Raoul is starting to feeling 'something' more than curiosity towards his mongrel pet
and my bet is that Guy is too which is why he took a flier. Guilt he feels something for someone else, guilt over what he now did to Riki, guilt that this feeling developed so soon after raping Riki.. . .
Guilt is a wonderful motivation. . . it can do a lot of things including driving people insane. So if you are heading back in the direction of Dana Bahn this would certainly start the ball rolling. But I will keep my fingers crossed if that is the way you are heading that the ending is not the same :)
Don't rush yourself, write when you can, and will look forward the next chapter whenever it happens :)
Yes, it was short and sweet, but still moves the plot along :)
So Raoul is starting to feeling 'something' more than curiosity towards his mongrel pet
and my bet is that Guy is too which is why he took a flier. Guilt he feels something for someone else, guilt over what he now did to Riki, guilt that this feeling developed so soon after raping Riki.. . .
Guilt is a wonderful motivation. . . it can do a lot of things including driving people insane. So if you are heading back in the direction of Dana Bahn this would certainly start the ball rolling. But I will keep my fingers crossed if that is the way you are heading that the ending is not the same :)
Don't rush yourself, write when you can, and will look forward the next chapter whenever it happens :)
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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That was a hell of a chapter, it was amazing. Not only because the lasta part >///< (KKKKiiiiiaaaaaa!!!!) but because Iason it's so obviously in love with hem, and also Raoul of course!!!
I love your fic. Keep going!!!
That was a hell of a chapter, it was amazing. Not only because the lasta part >///< (KKKKiiiiiaaaaaa!!!!) but because Iason it's so obviously in love with hem, and also Raoul of course!!!
I love your fic. Keep going!!!
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Riki is back and fighting strong. Brilliantly done.
So now that Riki has 'taken' Iason how does he see him in his 'mind'. Is he determined 'now' to break the Blondie or as it has all become a game of who is going to control who, or will the path lead them to be equals in the end?
As to Iason, ok he's got the fire back, but now what? He wants more, does he even realize what that more is? And how it effects him in 'everything' in the future.
Raoul. . . he is so logical, and yet I get the feelings that the emotions that he denies understanding are just there below the surface, as he tries to understand Guy.
As to Guy, the story of slum code gives us a better understanding of where he and Riki come from and the harsh reality of life there.
But in the end it wasn't slum code that drove Guy, it was his own jealousy, because he knew Riki never loved him.
But I think Guy is wrong at this point too, because if 'chance' and circumstance made it possible for Guy and Riki to leave the Blondies, if Guy went to Riki and said come back to me, Riki would. all for the wrong reasons mind you, but he would go back. It would be out of guilt, friendship, the past ties, because lets face it, the relationship was never about love on his part to begin with.
Keep going, love what you are doing here
Waiting patiently for the next update :)
So now that Riki has 'taken' Iason how does he see him in his 'mind'. Is he determined 'now' to break the Blondie or as it has all become a game of who is going to control who, or will the path lead them to be equals in the end?
As to Iason, ok he's got the fire back, but now what? He wants more, does he even realize what that more is? And how it effects him in 'everything' in the future.
Raoul. . . he is so logical, and yet I get the feelings that the emotions that he denies understanding are just there below the surface, as he tries to understand Guy.
As to Guy, the story of slum code gives us a better understanding of where he and Riki come from and the harsh reality of life there.
But in the end it wasn't slum code that drove Guy, it was his own jealousy, because he knew Riki never loved him.
But I think Guy is wrong at this point too, because if 'chance' and circumstance made it possible for Guy and Riki to leave the Blondies, if Guy went to Riki and said come back to me, Riki would. all for the wrong reasons mind you, but he would go back. It would be out of guilt, friendship, the past ties, because lets face it, the relationship was never about love on his part to begin with.
Keep going, love what you are doing here
Waiting patiently for the next update :)
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jajajaja!!! Thanks to you for writting this great fic!!!
Iason...impotence...jjajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajaajajajajajjajajaja
jajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajaja
jajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajaja!!!! My God he must be in total panic!!! I'll be XD
Poor Riky, he deserves the right to cry all he wants, alfer all, is not everyday your best friend slash lover treats you that way...
Hope u continue soon, i want to hear the conversation between Raoul and Guy, and also see what is going to make Iason "to get Riki back"
Iason...impotence...jjajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajaajajajajajjajajaja
jajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajaja
jajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajajajajajajajajjajajaja!!!! My God he must be in total panic!!! I'll be XD
Poor Riky, he deserves the right to cry all he wants, alfer all, is not everyday your best friend slash lover treats you that way...
Hope u continue soon, i want to hear the conversation between Raoul and Guy, and also see what is going to make Iason "to get Riki back"