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Jajajajaja!!! Poor Riki, why i wish a was in his place!!! Well...maybe not...XD
Nice chapter. Really sexy!!
Keep on going! I want to see "Riki the Dark" soon...and then, poor Iason.

Just found this and hope you update soon.

Your characters are very distinct and it will be interesting to see what you end up doing with them. Riki and Iason have the usual chemestry between them although at this stage, your Riki is more moderate behaviour wise, while Iason is a complete prick. It will be interesting to see if these behaviours modify as they continue to interact between them

In contrast you have Raoul and Guy. Guy at the moment really hasn't had a chance to show what he is made of, while Raoul seems to be more moderate in attitiude, although not happy at first with Iason's decisions in dealing with mongrels.

As to where you would go with this, I guess one possibility, which would be gut wrenching all the way around is if Guy and Riki were brought to pair to entertain their various 'masters'. Iason might start off cool, but I think all hell would be breaking out later. . .

Anyway, hope you update soon.

Im so happy u decided to update and i notice no one else has commented. I guess some people don't know a good story when one is up. I love your story so please keep updating them!!!! (^_^)

Hello!! Finally together!!! Iason (like always) it's just...A IDIOT!! Poor Riki. I just hope it's gets better (for him) in the future..ah! also for Guy (he is so cute!!)