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Hello there! I must confess something. English isn't my mother languaje and your fic use very...complex languaje..or more like the words, it's the ideas and phrases you write that are sometimes, very hard to read. But, the little bit i get, it's really interesting and...how to say it? Profound...maybe?
The fact that i keep reading even if i don't undestand half of it, say it!
Keep on going! I really like your fic.
See ya!!!

Oh, Jupiter, what is more to say?! You are the master! So Raoul finds pleasures in tidbits of tasting; light meal, light arousal ... Yet, he seems to be far from being satisfied. I like the way you portray Katze, with little bits of info, like the things Kato thinks about him, or Donovan saying it plainly - 'the boss is pissing on his property'. Will Katze lose what's his? In this confrontation with Raoul, will he lose what he struggles so much to keep to himself? Is this why Raoul becomes suddenly angry with him? Because maybe the Elite wants what he cannot have ...

Now, about Guy. Oh, I hope he will enjoy the fucking. It seems that Donovan stirs something in him, that he provokes the big man so much. After all, he knows he will feel good, but he doesn't want to lose rep, doesn't he? Hm, makes me wonder ... With Riki, Guy was the dominant male ... Perhaps, he has a fetish about being dominated?

I look forward to the next chapter, as always. I love your writing.

(10) Where to even begin, there was quite a lot that happened. Seeing Kato and what his life is like with Katze and how he views the man was interesting, it does make me wonder more about his life as an exfurniture, it seems like it could be rather lonely. And then there's Guy (dear lord) seriously boy just keep your mouth shut, is it really that hard *facepalm* I have no doubt though that this won't make much of a difference and he'll be back to being a pain in the ass soon enough, who knows in the end he might have even enjoyed it ;) As for the game that is Katze and Raoul, I think they just frustrate me to no end. There's that small bratty side of me that just wants Katze to say no and leave but even I know that it's not about selfcontrol it's about not having a choice. The absolute worst part of all this has to be not actually knowing what it is you did wrong, that must be infuriating for Katze. And Raoul seems to want Katze as this plaything but the minute he acts like he did he's mad - this is the problem with a game, you never know what the outcome will be. They started out so well, I love how sensual they are together it's too bad it didn't continue along those lines, I hold out hope for another try later :) Loved this as usual and now we have a little bit of mystery, who was that redhead in the picture. Can't wait to see the next chapter ^_^

Ah, the mysterious Ruby, that hangs on Raoul's wall. perhaps the reason the man turns hot and cold on a flip of the coin? It would explain so much in some ways.

As a chapter the sensual sensations that played out in Raoul's apartment were, if not revealing more of their natures, certainly were breathtaking for this reader :)

But the one thing that did strike me in one of your descriptions, (and I do love your ability here to reveal perhaps hidden truths) Just the fact that Kato in making the bed, notes Katze's preference for the silk deep green sheets, perhaps the shade of a certain someone's eyes this reader thinks?

An old scared coffee table, sheet colour all seem to take on deeper meaning in this tale of mixed emotions.

Continue on. ..looking forward to where ever you travel next :)

Weee! Three new chapters for me to gobble up on. My happiness knows no boundaries : ) Katze is so broken and in need, Raoul is so bound by his social status. I find it all so believable. This is truly a story I enjoy reading xD

(9) Interesting to get that look into everyday life of Katze with ex-pets and alleyways to Raoul in his luxury. And I have to agree with some of your other readers about Raoul and that table, it does seem to be very telling of a different side of him (or we're all reading way too much into it ;) But honestly who would ever think of any elite getting their hands dirty for anything but then Raoul has done a few things that would be considered outside the box, I wonder if even he realizes it. I feel like there's more to say about this chapter it's obvious that it's setting us up for something to come but with this disgustingly hot summer heat we're having I'm finding it rather hard to function let alone think without any AC *is melting*
Poor Katze I wonder if he'll catch any kind of break, although maybe getting to sleep with Raoul is the break ;) dinner is going to be interesting I can't wait to read the next update :)

First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to "drop by". You are, indeed, elegant and polite, two qualities that may not too popular in the fast shifting world we live in nowadays. Yet, I am very fond of them, maybe I'm old fashioned, I don't know.

About the chapter, now, well, can I say that you are a little mean? Just kidding. But you surely have the gift of letting things just hang in there, which I largely appreciate. What can I say, I can hardly wait to discover how the dinner will be, even if I have to wait for it. Also, I can sense another hot encounter between Donovan and Guy. Or is just my wishful thinking? It does not matter, you are simply a great writer, and I pale in envy when I read your stories. Provided that I do not become all hot and bothered, which is, actually, the regular norm. (Here's to me blushing and all)

I really love your story, so what is left for me to do is to beg for speed to your fingers and creativity. Good job all around!

So our Raoul is quite the sensualist. No wonder he was instantly seduced when he discovered Katze's private domain. This was not something new to him, but a part of him that no one is aware of. So imagine his anger and confusion to find that he an Katze are both the same here. No wonder it was such a mixed scene on so many levels.

Interestingly enough, your use of that old coffee table is also very telling. Something old, scared and yet valued, treated with a tenderness that would seem foreign to a Blondie's nature. So when things go array as they often do, can we expect to see sed table in splinters or still treated with the utmost care?

Can't wait to see 'dinner' another revealing moment for these two?
hope the next chapter is soon

I enjoyed the first few chapters when the storyline seemed to me to be more characterization ie the emotions, that literally bounced off of Raoul and Katze as well as what they were internalizing within themselves.

However, once Guy was entered into the mix the story became more 'plot orientated . I did enjoy the emotional byplay that was earlier, but now another dimension has been added that really makes me sit up and take notice.

Can't even begin to guess where this will all end up. The characters are tight, hot and dark in every aspect. Therefore anything is possible and probable.
Hope you continue with this soon.

(8) I don't know why you would think this came out of left field, it seemed to fit in just fine (but what do I know ;) The only thing that did surprise me was Raoul actually going all the way back to see Katze. And the one thing that stood out in that meeting was Raoul thinking of Katze as submissive, I've never thought of him that way but then he would wouldn't he, Blondies do have a different way of looking at things. As for Guy, he is an idiot. I can't blame him for wanting Katze (who wouldn't) but really did he honestly think Katze would ever agree to that. And does he really think who's going to top is the biggest problem, I'm glad Katze beat the crap out of him. One last thing that I had been thinking about was that even after eight chapters we are still dealing with Katze in his own environment. Most stories maybe only have little glimpses of Ceres and Katze's work while the main story mostly revolves around the elites, I like getting to see more of the other side of the story. Great to see a new chapter, poor Katze's already having a shitty day and I wonder if dealing with Iason will make it worse or better, I can't wait for the next update ^_^