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"Selective whore", that is ... Oh, Jupiter, that was so hot, and it wasn't even any intercourse involved. I loved it how Raoul punctuated his ownership in the end. I would love to see his reaction, if he found out what kind of proposition Guy had in mind. And Guy, having the hots for Katze ... man, that is just too good. please, keep it flowing!

Oooooooohh, an update. I am so thrilled! I can't wait to see what will happen next xD I've never really liked Guy. I hope Katze squashes him. *squish* An angry Katze. Now that will be fun to read about ^^ Hi hi hi. I still think you describe your characters so well :3 It’s a pleasure to read.

The more complicated ... the better! How will Katze solve this one? What will happen to Guy? I hope nothing entirely bad! ;)

(7) Guy is in so much trouble - honestly, in what world did he think spying on and blackmailing Katze would be a good idea. And showing that iron control that Katze has, just a little something out of place and it doesn't get by him, I find that an interesting part of his character. I wonder if part of it is from Katze having to work all those years for Iason without making mistakes or if it's because now that he's got his own life (to an extent) he wants to have it exactly the way he wants (or maybe both). And it was a wonderful start to the chapter, getting to see just what an impression that one night made on both the guys, this was obviously not something they could just pretend meant nothing or was a onetime thing, although I'm sure they'll try at least for awhile ;) So glad there's going to be more of this, your characterizations are just so interesting you can't help but want to find out more :)

(6) Loved it and I definitely think there's going to be another time ^.^ The power play between them was so good, that shift back and forth, just when one thinks he's in control it can all change in a second. One thing I noticed is how you've held on to their difference of position without resorting to S&M. Too often people seem to think that Blondies exert their control with physical violence (yes i realize there are some aspects of bondage) but really the thing about them is that they really don't have to, most of it's actually psychological. And Guy seeing what happened, I loved that twist although I also wanted to smack him for spying, the sneaky bugger. I'm glad he got put in his place by the bouncer, I hope he has many more encounters with him :)
Fabulous story, I thought you did so well in keeping it true to the feel of the original. I have nothing against happy AU stories that have happy endings for all but it's nice to see one that seems to fit with the reality of what's happening to these guys in the original. Now I know you come from more popular fandoms but I hope the small amount of reviews doesn't discourage you from writing more of the AnK guys, I would love another story by you ^_^

Oh, Jupiter! I am so glad you continued! I really hope it will be a next time! That was incredibly hot! And Guy watching.... Yeah, that was a really nice touch. Raoul gets himself into big trouble with "amber eyes"; hey, Elites, be aware, these mongrels are nothing but pure sweet poison! Kudos, your style is so refined and sophisticated, it makes my heart hurt.

Do I want more? Do I really? Heck yeah!! I love the way you portray the both of them. Raoul is so cold and still so smouldering, with all of his analytic nature intact. Katze is cold, bold and mocking, yet scared and submissive. They are a very interesting couple. I love how Raoul obsess over Katze. x3 I need and I want more :3 So please give me some <3 There is still room for so much more to happen. And what will Katze think when he notices the monitor turned on, showing his room, his bed? I know what I would feel. Humiliated and thirsting for blood.
He he he he. So please don’t leave us hanging okay :3

This is indeed a very good ank story. The only regret is that I have to imagine what will happen next. Katze is really special and Raoul seems to know everything about how to turn him around. The heat between them is realistic and fantastic at the same time. I have no words of praise to match the feelings I had reading your story. One of the best RaoulxKatze I've ever read.

(5) I think you're trying frustrate me to no end by stopping the chapter there, it was just getting to the good part (i swear i didn't say that in a whiny voice ;). I also liked how you kept up with the tension - is something bad going to happen, your never quite sure Raoul isn't all of a sudden going to lash out. I also loved how even in the middle of sex Raoul can't help but be the analytical creature that he is. Although with these two they both tend to think a little too much, with Katze though it's more a survival technique than anything. Another great chapter, despite having to wait I'm glad that there's going to be more :)
By the way thank you for the email to my last review.^^ I always love it when the authors respond to reviews, plus it pretty much guaranteed you a review for every remaining chapter ^_^

Oh, I do hope you're not planning on ending it like that. The word for that is; "cruel", laugh. I think you have captured the coldness of the elite most perfectly. I assume Katze's dick has been regrown? Raoul hinted at that in the first chapter even, right? Lol, well, I want to stay with this story for as long as possible. I really hope it won't end with these five chapters and I would even like to read something even longer. Like 20 chapters or 50. Laugh. :3 You are doing really good! <3

Lol, my 'key-words' are: "unmanly Tomorrow" In a sad way, it fits with the story. Katze is used just like a tool, or a toy.