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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG katze is in such deep shit! Raoul has shown how possessive he is over Katze and to have his affair be thrown in his face like that *whistle* it aint gonna be pretty.
Man i'm going to be dying until the next update comes around! SH
Man i'm going to be dying until the next update comes around! SH
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(26) Katze you silly boy, you may live to regret that I would think. I wouldn’t say that I’m upset per say… alright maybe a smidge but I’m definitely disappointed by the turn of events with Katze.
It’s easy to see just how affected Katze is by all this since normally I would think he’s much too disciplined to be getting drunk at such an important event. I’m guessing getting him drunk was key to him giving in to Admon’s advances. And I have to wonder, if Katze has already made a connection with Raoul than I don’t see how this is going to help Admon besides just getting one over on the Blondie and the hope Katze may actually look at him and not just use him as a substitute.
I can’t help but think that if Admon hadn’t purposely seduced Katze I would almost feel sorry for him having to be part of Niiro’s ‘diabolical master plan’ because he doesn’t seem to be getting anything out of it. Even Niiro doesn’t pay him much mind, he’s in effect disposable, not a very nice existence.
I wonder if Katze is feeling a little nostalgic for the days when he could just hide in the shadows and conduct his business unnoticed and without much thought to what was going on down in the elite mob. Maybe living an outside existence wasn’t so bad, there’s no going back though I think Raoul will see to that.
Finally we get Raoul and Niiro meeting again and Raoul is in a downright nasty mood, brings out the bitch that’s for sure. Although I think I find it a little too early to really tell what the impact of this meeting is going to be. Is Niiro just playing with Raoul to meet his own ends (whatever they may be) because at this point he doesn’t struck me as someone who is very sentimental about relationships. I think he's using Raoul and it has something to do with the whole 'Chosen One', I can't wait to find out more because I have all kinds of ideas running through my mind but it'll be interesting to find out for sure ^_^
Normally I would think that Anja’s little scheme would work since anything that plays to Guy’s ego would definitely get his attention but considering how jealous and possessive Guy is I can’t imagine him being interested in Anja, he’s too distracted by Donovan right now. (run-on sentence much *rolls eyes*)
You know I thought I didn’t have much to say about this chapter and then I start typing and it’s like I can’t stop but I have to stop because Criminal Minds is on :) Another fabulous chapter in this amazing story ^_^
PS - i haven't had a chance yet but at some point i look forward to checking out your website, there aren't nearly enough hours in the day to get to everything :)
It’s easy to see just how affected Katze is by all this since normally I would think he’s much too disciplined to be getting drunk at such an important event. I’m guessing getting him drunk was key to him giving in to Admon’s advances. And I have to wonder, if Katze has already made a connection with Raoul than I don’t see how this is going to help Admon besides just getting one over on the Blondie and the hope Katze may actually look at him and not just use him as a substitute.
I can’t help but think that if Admon hadn’t purposely seduced Katze I would almost feel sorry for him having to be part of Niiro’s ‘diabolical master plan’ because he doesn’t seem to be getting anything out of it. Even Niiro doesn’t pay him much mind, he’s in effect disposable, not a very nice existence.
I wonder if Katze is feeling a little nostalgic for the days when he could just hide in the shadows and conduct his business unnoticed and without much thought to what was going on down in the elite mob. Maybe living an outside existence wasn’t so bad, there’s no going back though I think Raoul will see to that.
Finally we get Raoul and Niiro meeting again and Raoul is in a downright nasty mood, brings out the bitch that’s for sure. Although I think I find it a little too early to really tell what the impact of this meeting is going to be. Is Niiro just playing with Raoul to meet his own ends (whatever they may be) because at this point he doesn’t struck me as someone who is very sentimental about relationships. I think he's using Raoul and it has something to do with the whole 'Chosen One', I can't wait to find out more because I have all kinds of ideas running through my mind but it'll be interesting to find out for sure ^_^
Normally I would think that Anja’s little scheme would work since anything that plays to Guy’s ego would definitely get his attention but considering how jealous and possessive Guy is I can’t imagine him being interested in Anja, he’s too distracted by Donovan right now. (run-on sentence much *rolls eyes*)
You know I thought I didn’t have much to say about this chapter and then I start typing and it’s like I can’t stop but I have to stop because Criminal Minds is on :) Another fabulous chapter in this amazing story ^_^
PS - i haven't had a chance yet but at some point i look forward to checking out your website, there aren't nearly enough hours in the day to get to everything :)
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice nice nice. Another chapter that enthralled me. Things just keep getting more interesting and more complex.
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This reminds me of a story I used to listen when I was a kid. It was actually an adaptation for children after "Princess Turandot", and I remember the prince saying, before the cold-hearted princess: "And now, when I was about to be happy, I witness the storm breaking loose". I guess the English version is more poetic, but I just translated the words as they were in my Native language.
Katze here ... oh, it breaks my heart, but I cannot say that I do not understand him. After all, he does not see that Raoul does not give in to Sir Niiro's advances, and he draws the conclusions while concentrating on his own hurt, rather on facts. Admon would be a sore loser, that's for sure, so, in the end, depending on Raoul's reaction, he can still cause serious damage to our dear lovers' relationship. It will be hard for Katze to explain why possessed him to take Admon like that, and I'm not certain that Katze simply saying to Raoul: "You know, baby, I just couldn't cum until I imagined you being fucked by me..."
Barrie18 is right, that was a hate fuck. (I don't know if the term truly exists, but I learnt it from 'Californication', so it stays. :)) How Katze would feel after all that, it is up to you to tell us during the next episode. I bet he will not feel that good, after all, he is partially aware of the fact the Admon is seducing him, and he knows this practically should not mean anything. But Raoul will be hurt, oh, I can feel it in my gut, he will be so hurt, that I don't what he'll do. He hates Admon, no, he is practically repulsed by the android, and he will see red in front of his eyes when he learns about this. Oh, Katze, baby, what have you done?
The android girl should be aware that Guy is not so easy to manipulate. After all, he is quite of paranoid, and I don't buy it that he would fall prey to her graces, just because she's showing a little cleavage. The man is smart, this is just my opinion of it, or simply, it is just wishful thinking, and I want to see her fail.
Will you tell us next time what exactly happened between Raoul and Niiro in the distant past?
I cannot wait for your next installment. Have a nice life, dear author!
Katze here ... oh, it breaks my heart, but I cannot say that I do not understand him. After all, he does not see that Raoul does not give in to Sir Niiro's advances, and he draws the conclusions while concentrating on his own hurt, rather on facts. Admon would be a sore loser, that's for sure, so, in the end, depending on Raoul's reaction, he can still cause serious damage to our dear lovers' relationship. It will be hard for Katze to explain why possessed him to take Admon like that, and I'm not certain that Katze simply saying to Raoul: "You know, baby, I just couldn't cum until I imagined you being fucked by me..."
Barrie18 is right, that was a hate fuck. (I don't know if the term truly exists, but I learnt it from 'Californication', so it stays. :)) How Katze would feel after all that, it is up to you to tell us during the next episode. I bet he will not feel that good, after all, he is partially aware of the fact the Admon is seducing him, and he knows this practically should not mean anything. But Raoul will be hurt, oh, I can feel it in my gut, he will be so hurt, that I don't what he'll do. He hates Admon, no, he is practically repulsed by the android, and he will see red in front of his eyes when he learns about this. Oh, Katze, baby, what have you done?
The android girl should be aware that Guy is not so easy to manipulate. After all, he is quite of paranoid, and I don't buy it that he would fall prey to her graces, just because she's showing a little cleavage. The man is smart, this is just my opinion of it, or simply, it is just wishful thinking, and I want to see her fail.
Will you tell us next time what exactly happened between Raoul and Niiro in the distant past?
I cannot wait for your next installment. Have a nice life, dear author!
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit talk about a reread lol. This doesnt look like it will end well for Katze considering how possessively Raoul has treated Katze so far. Raoul is so not going to be happy at all.
Poor Katze has given up and even sloshed he knows its wrong but to me its just like sleeping with Admon was showing that it was over between them even though Raoul had made it clear (well for me anyway) that it wasn't.
And i must say that i am very interested how Admon's twin tries to handle Guy and Donny boy's reaction in seeing that his lover is getting hit on.
I'm going to waiting on pins and needles for the next update! Thanks for the great read! SH
Poor Katze has given up and even sloshed he knows its wrong but to me its just like sleeping with Admon was showing that it was over between them even though Raoul had made it clear (well for me anyway) that it wasn't.
And i must say that i am very interested how Admon's twin tries to handle Guy and Donny boy's reaction in seeing that his lover is getting hit on.
I'm going to waiting on pins and needles for the next update! Thanks for the great read! SH
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well it happened as promised/predicted....Happy about it...no, but necessary ....sadly yes.
So lets start with the 'seduction'. . . well really when you come down to it, Admon may have struck a few cords, but it was only when he 'attacked' did he get the response he wanted.....but then again, it wasn't the response he wanted. If he wanted to put it bluntly , to be 'fucked' with in an inch of his life, well he achieved that. But if he was looking for an emotional connection....he failed miserably. I just wonder while all this took place, did our little empath come to realize what was playing in Katze's mind at that moment of completion. That it was Raoul Katze's mind was 'fucking' and not him. And I use that word for a very good reason again. This was done in an act of anger. Katze for all he tries to separate himself from his feelings for Raoul, shows here the possessiveness that he would never show if sober , no matter how hurt/anger he is feeling.
So no sweet kisses, or gentle caresses at the end of this (I hope). It doesn't call for it. If anything, I would expect, the mongrel to be shocked by what he did and felt and send the Karinese on his way. . . another rejection for Admon....
Ajna....I would like to think that she too is too cock sure of herself. Oh yes, as stated before, cleverer than her brother, but I would like to think that Guy will play the game to a point before setting her back in her place. I think what everyone here has failed to realize or take into account is what emotions can do. . . Yes Katze 'fucked' in anger....but Guy is in an honest relationship with Donovan, and that already puts up one barrier to her manipulations. Erratic yes, but no fool either our Bison boy.
Raoul.....well if he hadn't been distracted by Niiro things would have been played out differently. But once again I believe my little theory is being confirmed. Niiro is coming on strong with his traveling hands and our Blondie, moves out of reach.
But what is more important is the thought that goes through Raoul's mind...."The mistakes of a curious youth would not be repeated."
This does not sound like someone pushing away a former loved one. This is a man who did an act, perhaps to prove something to himself, because at that point he couldn't have what he really wanted and this was his only solution.
In some ways, I would imagine that past act done with 'emotion' was a reverse mirror image of what just took place in that room upstairs. With Raoul looking into amber eyes (remember Niiro did change his eye colour....must have an a good reason besides fashion) and seeing a 'Furniture' under him instead of an Elite.
Now the only question is what next. Raoul will find out. He will see it in seconds the minute Admon leaves that room.
I can't believe he will fall into Niiro's waiting arms. But I do believe that the next conversation he would have with Katze would be a most enlightening one. Perhaps...this time a few plain truths might come out of one of them in a language they can both understand.
Don't think Niiro will cope well with rejection though, and will probably be self centered enough to blame Admon for this turn of events rather than accept that he himself is not wanted. Probably leading him to esculate what ever is going on in that head of his, out of frustration and to prove that he is the genius, the better man, better creator etc etc.
So I will now sit back and wait to see what happens next... and I am selfish enough to say, I hope it's not too long a wait. :)
So lets start with the 'seduction'. . . well really when you come down to it, Admon may have struck a few cords, but it was only when he 'attacked' did he get the response he wanted.....but then again, it wasn't the response he wanted. If he wanted to put it bluntly , to be 'fucked' with in an inch of his life, well he achieved that. But if he was looking for an emotional connection....he failed miserably. I just wonder while all this took place, did our little empath come to realize what was playing in Katze's mind at that moment of completion. That it was Raoul Katze's mind was 'fucking' and not him. And I use that word for a very good reason again. This was done in an act of anger. Katze for all he tries to separate himself from his feelings for Raoul, shows here the possessiveness that he would never show if sober , no matter how hurt/anger he is feeling.
So no sweet kisses, or gentle caresses at the end of this (I hope). It doesn't call for it. If anything, I would expect, the mongrel to be shocked by what he did and felt and send the Karinese on his way. . . another rejection for Admon....
Ajna....I would like to think that she too is too cock sure of herself. Oh yes, as stated before, cleverer than her brother, but I would like to think that Guy will play the game to a point before setting her back in her place. I think what everyone here has failed to realize or take into account is what emotions can do. . . Yes Katze 'fucked' in anger....but Guy is in an honest relationship with Donovan, and that already puts up one barrier to her manipulations. Erratic yes, but no fool either our Bison boy.
Raoul.....well if he hadn't been distracted by Niiro things would have been played out differently. But once again I believe my little theory is being confirmed. Niiro is coming on strong with his traveling hands and our Blondie, moves out of reach.
But what is more important is the thought that goes through Raoul's mind...."The mistakes of a curious youth would not be repeated."
This does not sound like someone pushing away a former loved one. This is a man who did an act, perhaps to prove something to himself, because at that point he couldn't have what he really wanted and this was his only solution.
In some ways, I would imagine that past act done with 'emotion' was a reverse mirror image of what just took place in that room upstairs. With Raoul looking into amber eyes (remember Niiro did change his eye colour....must have an a good reason besides fashion) and seeing a 'Furniture' under him instead of an Elite.
Now the only question is what next. Raoul will find out. He will see it in seconds the minute Admon leaves that room.
I can't believe he will fall into Niiro's waiting arms. But I do believe that the next conversation he would have with Katze would be a most enlightening one. Perhaps...this time a few plain truths might come out of one of them in a language they can both understand.
Don't think Niiro will cope well with rejection though, and will probably be self centered enough to blame Admon for this turn of events rather than accept that he himself is not wanted. Probably leading him to esculate what ever is going on in that head of his, out of frustration and to prove that he is the genius, the better man, better creator etc etc.
So I will now sit back and wait to see what happens next... and I am selfish enough to say, I hope it's not too long a wait. :)
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EP, have loved all of the chapters that you have written, I needed to see what was going to happen with the elicit relationship of Raoul & Katze . Now I am absolutely hating Admon, Niiro, and that female Admon. I can't believe that Katze allowed himself to be seduced like that although I did like the fact that Katze was dreaming about banging Raoul's back out. I really loved that he couldn't come until his mind had completely replaced Admon with the sexy Blondie. Now I have a few questions. What happened to Riki? I know he was hurt in the beginning of the story, and close to the middle Raoul had to treat his injuries caused by a sexual session gone wrong. And why does Niiro want Guy? Nobody accept Katze's bodyguard wants him, hes icky and rude, so what make him special? Why didn't Raoul leave Niiro where he was and go to Katze like he wanted to? He new that Niiro was up to something and if he really had issues with Niiro touching him why didn't he tell him instead of "subtly" pushing him away? He has so much to say when its Katze, but nothing about Niiro? This is so upsetting, but its also addicting. I look forward to your next chapter.
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May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(25) Really did Deek actually think Katze would just let it go, he should count himself lucky this is as far as Katze's taking things, for now. A threat is the least of his worries. And is it just me or do you have a thing for older furniture because Deek comes across as older and I generally think of them as young men 18-25yrs, obviously they can be older the longer a Blondie keeps them. Katze I could understand why he would have an older furniture but Raoul seems a little unusual. I'm wondering if it's a way of having a witness to things that have happened and knows Raoul's history.
Couldn't help but notice the difference in personality between Admon and Anja, not entirely surprising considering their different experiences. Admon could pass for human, Anja on the other hand certainly comes across as more machine but that could also just be how she acts when around Niiro. I suppose part of it could be that Admon has had to function and think independently but we did see a bit of boundary pushing by Anja and I certainly don't think she's as docile as she first appears.
Seems that Niiro delved into science mumbo-jumbo a bit, I think I get the gist of what he was saying but I have to wonder why it is the elite can't just say what they mean instead of elaborate explanations. Actually with all this talk of history and DNA it reminded me of a question I had earlier in the story when you talked of Mr&Mrs Wolf, how old is Amoi? Do we know or have any idea of how many generations have passed since the Wolf's time. I don't remember ever reading about that but it would be interesting to know :) Interesting how Raoul and Niiro still know each other fairly well considering they haven't seen each other in awhile. I'm guessing Raoul is the one who's changed the most, I think Niiro's going to be in for a surprise when they meet again. (nii-nii *snicker*)^^
I can understand why Katze acts the way he does, he's trying to protect himself but Raoul's constant need to poke and prod the poor boy is just mean (he's like a 8yr old with a crush). Obviously there's more to it than a need to torture and hopefully Katze will soon realize that :) And at the very least getting a hot elevator makeout session has got to put you in a good mood ;)
“I never lose, Katze of Ceres, remember that.”- I'm sure that's what all the elites think but let's hope Raoul's luck holds out.^^
Last couple of things, kisses for Donovan simply for being all kinds of awesome, too bad Katze's going to kill him the minute he gets his hands on him and poor Kato he has no idea it's his last day on Amoi *giggles* flustered Katze is a rather fun Katze ^_^ Excellent chapter and nice and long too :) I'm glad I finally got this review in, it's only taken me a week to find the time at least I managed before you got out the next chapter ^_^
Hope you're having a great weekend hun, looking forward to the next update :)
Couldn't help but notice the difference in personality between Admon and Anja, not entirely surprising considering their different experiences. Admon could pass for human, Anja on the other hand certainly comes across as more machine but that could also just be how she acts when around Niiro. I suppose part of it could be that Admon has had to function and think independently but we did see a bit of boundary pushing by Anja and I certainly don't think she's as docile as she first appears.
Seems that Niiro delved into science mumbo-jumbo a bit, I think I get the gist of what he was saying but I have to wonder why it is the elite can't just say what they mean instead of elaborate explanations. Actually with all this talk of history and DNA it reminded me of a question I had earlier in the story when you talked of Mr&Mrs Wolf, how old is Amoi? Do we know or have any idea of how many generations have passed since the Wolf's time. I don't remember ever reading about that but it would be interesting to know :) Interesting how Raoul and Niiro still know each other fairly well considering they haven't seen each other in awhile. I'm guessing Raoul is the one who's changed the most, I think Niiro's going to be in for a surprise when they meet again. (nii-nii *snicker*)^^
I can understand why Katze acts the way he does, he's trying to protect himself but Raoul's constant need to poke and prod the poor boy is just mean (he's like a 8yr old with a crush). Obviously there's more to it than a need to torture and hopefully Katze will soon realize that :) And at the very least getting a hot elevator makeout session has got to put you in a good mood ;)
“I never lose, Katze of Ceres, remember that.”- I'm sure that's what all the elites think but let's hope Raoul's luck holds out.^^
Last couple of things, kisses for Donovan simply for being all kinds of awesome, too bad Katze's going to kill him the minute he gets his hands on him and poor Kato he has no idea it's his last day on Amoi *giggles* flustered Katze is a rather fun Katze ^_^ Excellent chapter and nice and long too :) I'm glad I finally got this review in, it's only taken me a week to find the time at least I managed before you got out the next chapter ^_^
Hope you're having a great weekend hun, looking forward to the next update :)
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ohh i love the gentle kiss Raoul gave Katze after his (their?) shower. And how Katze made sure Deek knew the little stunt he pulled wasnt going to fly with him. Anticipation is soaring for the next chapter! SH
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! That was so funny! The elevator scene, I mean! But hot as hell, too! I really like that Raoul is not giving up, although Katze still sees himself as a substitute for Sir Niiro, when, clearly, it is exactly the other way around.
Donovan was great, pulling at his boss' chain, with that stunt. Guy is ... Guy, and, as barrie18 says, I hope his feelings for D will keep him away from harm.
It was gut wrenching to see Katze so down about what he thinks it's goodbye. While I'm scared about the game Sir Niiro and Admon will set in place, I'm so glad our dear redhead is so wrong. And, that was sooooo hot, how he noticed Raoul being so attractive in his getup, but feeling jealous, 'cause he thinks his Blondie got so dressed up for his encounter with Sir Niiro. I bet Raoul can only think about how to make Katze more mad about him, if that could be possible.
I'm going to re-read this right now, it's just too good it deserves seconds!
Donovan was great, pulling at his boss' chain, with that stunt. Guy is ... Guy, and, as barrie18 says, I hope his feelings for D will keep him away from harm.
It was gut wrenching to see Katze so down about what he thinks it's goodbye. While I'm scared about the game Sir Niiro and Admon will set in place, I'm so glad our dear redhead is so wrong. And, that was sooooo hot, how he noticed Raoul being so attractive in his getup, but feeling jealous, 'cause he thinks his Blondie got so dressed up for his encounter with Sir Niiro. I bet Raoul can only think about how to make Katze more mad about him, if that could be possible.
I'm going to re-read this right now, it's just too good it deserves seconds!