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YAY!!!!! This was AMAZING! More, please! Write a sequel!

Yeah, Watanuki is a major spazzoid. I only really like the pairing because I like how that contrasts to Doumeki's srs stoic-ness. So, props on keeping everyone in character, this is good porn.

The big bad storm was a perfect setting for seducing Watanuke, who was happy to have Domeki so close to him. Funny bit, when the storm got darker, lounder when the girl's name was mentioned. Domeki noticed it. Gave a little extra zip to the moment. Sweet love-making too.

I liked this a lot~

What I love about this fic...is that if DouWata ever became canon and certain charris were still around... I could completely believe this is a way they'd make it happen. BEcause, seriously? Highly amusing. Nice bits of trivia/research. And just down right fangirly goodness. (Heavens dislike "Himawari" XD that made me chuckle even if I personally think she's sweet.) Great work!

Fear the storm Overlord.Lol!
But It was really great,the detail on the feelings,the first-timer but knowing Doumeki and naive Watanuki.And all-knowing Yuuko and Mokona.
And I liked the song too,thanks!I've just started listening to other of their songs!Great job!

Great story. You captured two of my favorite characters perfectly. I hope you write another one shot with Watanuki and Doumeki.

I actually read this story yesterday and, while I adored it, I was too lazy to review. I figured I'd wander back into the xxxHolic section in a month or so and review then...until low and behold, not three hours after finishing the story and not reviewing it began to rain. Not that sissy pitter-patter rain, either. Flash flood warning, horrifyingly loud thunder, fear-for-your-life rain storm.

...So today I hurried to my computer as soon as work was over to write you this nice little review and ask nicely that you please not drown me in my sleep tonight.

Everyone was greatly in character—which is a real gem when in comes to yaoi fan fiction—and the splash of plot was more than welcome. I enjoyed it immensely and I hope that you'll continue to write this pairing in the future.

Mizu.B
mizu-benten@hotmail.com

Very cool. I thought you did a really good job of keeping them real. I just started reading some Watanuki/Doumeki stuff yesterday to see if I like it, and I am kinda addicted now. This was very goood. I think it's funny how Yuko is always in some way behind pushing them together throughout the series, so something like this totally makes sense. I would love to see more things like this from you in the future!