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January 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is really good; did you post this on Fanfiction.Net? Is it finished?
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April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... Is this story on fanfiction as well? I'd like to favorite it there as I don't really have an account on this site
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
On a whim, I decided to read your story, even though I have somewhat low expectations of Adultfanfiction.net. I'm glad that I did. Good characterization, the deviations from canon are realistic, and good grammar and spelling. I'll definitely keep an eye on this one. I look forward to future installments. Good job.
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fiction, but not very many people know about it since it isn't uploaded in a more knowledgeable site like Fanfiction.net or Beast's Lair. In fact, there aren't very many fiction like this, so this is truly a rare gem. Now if there was an easy way for me to know when this fanfic gets updated...
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Astounding! And excellently done, too! Be sure to continue the story! ^_^
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really really awesome. Perfect grammar and spelling, the story flows well, and its believable. I hope you continue this.
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far this story's been interesting with proficient grammar and characterization. Just . . . Damn it, I'm hoping for Archer/Rin after he wrapped his arms around her in the hallway.
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how your going to break the news to Saber and Rin that Archer is Shirou in future chapter especially with all these interactions their having with each other, words said that cause them to ponder. It is so messed up that Archer knows so much and everyone is completely oblivious. Good job. I still think you should post this on fanfiction.net. Especially since its a plot driver story that doesn't have blatant sexual references.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting that Archer would choose to speak with Saber. I hope you continue your story as I would like to read your version of the war and how Archer is going to mess things up more than he did in the original timeline.
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story should be in fanfiction.net, you would probably get more readers. Aside from that its a good change with Archer as the central figure, with him behaving a little differently there should be a rather big change in the plot, and I have read all three routes so I now Archer if he wanted to he could have defended himself from saber.