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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
EXCITED FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!! was really good :)
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March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute its been a while but next chapter? Since you already wrote it and all lol
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January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's so cute, I really hope you post another chapter.
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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i would like to read the 2nd chapter
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it! All sweet and innocent and just like Tohru! More, more!
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I hope you will do a second chapter. It was good, didn't feel forced or anything.
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it and would love to see what happens next! I have to admit ever since I first watched collection of the show I found I liked those two as a couple. Fortunately for my curiosity and unfortuantely for my bank account I found out the story continued even further in manga form. But I diagress the story was rather true to their characters, and Kyo having a nightmare about losing his new friend works real well. I loved it and if there is more I definately want to read it!
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May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it lol. I like that Thoru was becoming bolder. Please continue! :D
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygosh! That was possibly the best piece of fluff I've read in awhile! Put up the second chapter RIGHT NOW!!!! pretty please?
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww, sweet! the tohru babble thing is right on, just watch using he/she/him/her etc. it's hard not to overuse them but if you can find ways to cut back on it, it's an easy way to polish writing. post the new chapter soon!