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I really liked this, and would like to see more. It was simple, it was sweet and that was all it needed to be. I really hope to see more.

It was really sweet and well written. I would like to see what comes next, so please continue.

it was very good

Wow! That was great. It was rather suspensefully sweet, and showed the braveness and kindness of Tohru. And I could see Kyo, half in and half out of a dream, being too displaced to react violently to her presence, especially with the wet weather. So, wow, this actually seems possible. Now what I want to happen next probably is impossible considering their characters, but, maybe... Well hell, it's fanfiction, anything can happen. Yay for 2nd Chapter!! Bookmarkation!!!!

*snickers* That was sweet actually--I can't wait to read what you have in store for these two (hint, hint).