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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Mikey: this section doesn't have nearly enough het stories. Your ability to understand two of the most complex characters in all of Geass and build a plausible story with them is quite impressive, honestly. I've always had great difficulty with Lelouch, and I won't touch C.C. with a five-foot pole. XD
On a more technical note, your grammar and construction is far from perfect. It is, however, serviceable; I was able to understand what you meant without difficulty. Since you haven't requested in-depth proofreading, I will simply note that you have a proclivity for run-on sentences. Not the end of the world, by any means. I hope to see more of your work. ^_^
On a more technical note, your grammar and construction is far from perfect. It is, however, serviceable; I was able to understand what you meant without difficulty. Since you haven't requested in-depth proofreading, I will simply note that you have a proclivity for run-on sentences. Not the end of the world, by any means. I hope to see more of your work. ^_^
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice man i realy like it there never enouge straight stuff like this in cg section