rate_review Reviews

I just wanted to tell you that my friend linked me to this fic on another site, and I loved it so much, but I'm not sure I reviewed it because of the way the other site worked...I don't even remember the details, but asdfghjkl; I <3 this fic. It's just the flavour of erotica I needed in this fandom. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.

There was some stunning imagery in this fic!

"...and his voice is pleasant, conversational, but pulled curiously tight, like a thread about to snap."

"...that man's voice crawling all over his skin, setting his teeth on edge. The memory of Break's kiss sits like a ghost on his lips..."

"...dagger-toothed smile..."

These were just lovely. : )

Wow, ok, that was a little bit creepy almost but I absolutely loved it. O__O
I had doubts about whether or not Gilbert is capable of such actions but the more I read, I realised Break was pretty much leading him into it so I can definitely picture this.
Very very well written, I would love to see more Break x Gil from you! <3

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Oh wow. You have got both these characters (and Emily, I suppose --shudders--) down pat. They feel perfectly spot on, and I could easily (much too easily as it stands) imagine something like this going on, or having gone on.

It's dangerous and sexy and hot and just a little bit more than frightening...and I loved it.

*heart*

This made me cry, while simultaneously being crazy hot. Great work, god damn.