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Throughly enjoyed the intriguing story. Looking forward to more chapters of the world you have created.

Oh oh oh oh Please Please Please do tell me that you are out there still considering continuing this story!
I absolutely adore it. And LOVED the never ending twists that you made in it! The last part was soooo unexpected! Did Jupiter knew about the secret mission of the agencie?
I have the feeling that she knew and that is why she sent Iason to meet Riki again to test their bond, even after the brainwashing.
Xoxo

please continue this wonderful story here or on http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8872975/12/Do-You-Remember where are only 12 chap I reali want to know what happens after chap 24 (a reali clif-hanger) LOL

Do you have ANY intentions on continue with "Do you remember?"??? I just LOVED it!!!

Wow, when you began this fanfiction, it was interesting, but needed a lot of polishing still... These last two chapters have been superb. You've come a long way from enthusiastic and bumbling to more in-character and refined. Keep up the great work & remember that while drama and angst can be good sometimes, they are only the spices to add flavor to the dish of sexual tension. Use them sparingly : D

I keep waiting for an update, such a great story please continue soon! Your a truly great writer, and you have a very original take on this story, can't wait to see where it is all going!!!!

Wah!! Oh my kami. this is a seriously good story! the plot is great and had me bouncing on the edge of my seat and just about pulling my hair out! What's going to happen now?! Is Iason going to ask Katze to investigate 'Rikki Black' on Amoi? gah! I wanna know!!! PLease update soooon!

Middie

I knew you'd update this eventually. I have immense faith in you so I never gave up hope XD. Anyway YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Riki and Iason are about to do the nasty TeeHee. That is so awesome. I did have the urge to slap the Sit out of Iason when he treated Riki like dirt though; I'm glad his feelings was hurt when the sexy, sinuous, midnight sun eyed, ONYX body guard ignored him. Now here's gonna be the issue. Jupiter has erased Iason's memories of the ONYX, she mongrel napped and erased the ONYX's memories, she placed him on a planet the he should have never run into the BLONDIE on, and forbade all involved with the BLONDIE to ever mention the ONYX again. So given these things that the AI has done who do you think is gonna be more shocked to find out they are together (fate is a green-eyed BI). Now I'm just waiting for the RUBY mongrel to be contacted about finding out the identity of the ONYX. Then the lovers will be nearly reunited, hopefully Iason will do it right this time... If you're wondering why I keep calling Riki an ONYX is because I how you can see my hopes on what I mean by Iason doing it right. I HOPE he demands for Jupiter to make Riki an ONYX elite (she made Aki a platina) so Riki should be an ONYX so that Iason can take him as his mate and have him on equal footing as well, also I don't think Riki would completely come back to him under any other circumstances.

Anyhoo I loved the chappy HN and look forward to the next {*.^} Mikki

wow! you continued it!! i am so glad to see an update! so i figured i owed you a review. i absolutely love your work. the characters have real depth, I feel you have taken them above and beyond the original story line. Your plot is also very intricate and intriguing. While waiting for updates i have found myself going back and re-reading this story over and over. Your writing style is very enjoyable and your capacity for language and sensualism is probably the best I have ever seen. I can't wait to see Riki and Iason reunite and see how it works out this time.

Also as a side note, your blondie uke scene was HOT! The image of Katze rimming Raoul is now permanent brain candy. Waits impatiently for more!!

Where were u?!!!Here I thought u abandoned his story!Is the sex scene will b next?