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OMG! Poor Raoul..but well...he kind of..deserve it....Sorry my beautifull baby Raoul, but all of that was just your fault, nobody else to blame, just you. Of course that doesn't mean i'm happy. That must hurt a lot taking in care who was the seme and being the first time ann all...T-T
The part at the Laboratory, pretty nice!!! They are both starting to "like" each other more that they should but...i'm not angry for that!!! The problems is that maybe after the rape (because it was that) Roaul will end a little...mmmm...how to say it...scare of other to touch him? Or maybe not. Afte rall, he is a big boy and, he already knew (thank's to Riki) the pleasure of sex, just that he tried to bite more than he can.
aAnyway...the next chapter promises a lot of "fun"!!!!! Continue soon!!!!

I really like the way you end every chapter, it makes us eager for the next one.

So far the only surprise I'm having with this story is the 'tone'. From the brief synopsis, I really thought we would be wallowing in angst as Riki has to deal with Iason's memory loss and try and work out a way to get him to remember. But so far, even though this is the case, everyone is just so light hearted about everything (except possible for the Jupiter moment) its more like a boys night out XD

I have to admit, I do like the way that Riki is playing Raoul, but as I pointed out to you in your earlier story, seduction can be a two way street. And from what I can see so far, Raoul for all his bluster, is a gentler Master than Iason ever was. Even though he is taking Riki to work with him supposedly to make sure Iason doesn't steal hi, he plans to keep him occupied rather than just sit at his feet. He is starting to reconize Riki as a person. And Riki will come to appreciate these small kindnesses that were never part of Iason's make up..

As for Iason, I find his whole personality at the moment wrapped for a better word. He is just so 'jolly' that it is frightening. .I realize his memory is wiped but even his attitude toward Raoul, is just so. . . weirdly happy that I really keep looking to find that this is an imperfect clone and the real Iason is locked up somewhere. ..XD

So all things considered, if you keep down this road, I see a 'happy' threesome developing here, unless I am right (and if I am, I'd fall on the floor in shock) and this turns into a foursome of sorts.

Still curious about Jupiters plans and looking forward to the next update XD

It's a great story idea, sexy. The wording is a little awkward at times and takes you out of the story.

Gracias!!! I mean, thank you!!!! For the fast release, i didn't even feel the time between the last one and this!!! Maybe because i laugh so much!!! And of course, this one wasn't the exception...jijiji, Iason it's son uch funny in this fic, becasuse he is kind of dumb (he doesn't remember a thing and it's kind of silly) and ...he is SOOOO MUCH OF A PERVET!!!! I mean, he always was but now...jijiji, that "dreams" he has...OMG!!!
About Raouls (my pretty and sweet raoul) and Riki...mmmm, i'm starting to suspect....Riki it's starting to "like" him more and more, you know like...discovering his good points, help him to do "stuff" ( >///< he said it's for actually get control over him but...yea, that what the all say at the beginig) and Raoul...he get to the point of taking him to his work, with the excuse of "Not let Iason get him", yeah, right!!!!
Even with that idea in my mind...you know...i don't dislike it so much...i mean...Riki is Riki (sexy ans hell!), raoul is MY raoul (who deserve the best of the best) and Iason like the 3th member...mmm...no so bad....XDXDXDXD (Yes, i'm a pervert and what?!!!)

I love how you closed it with Iason's fantasy. Update soon please.

Hi!!!! New chapter!!! Yai!!! Anyway, you say maybe there won't be actualizations very often, but...what the hell!! The only i ask for it's that you keep going with the history. It's amazing so far, and it's just the first two chapters so i'm having big expectations from you...as always.
So...Raould...T-T My pretty and perfect Raoul...isn't perfect and pretty anymore...TT-TT BBBBBUuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...sniff...sniff...and Riki, oh, my poor riki, with Iason so close but at the same time so far...and my poor Iason (have you notice they are all "my") with his mind erased...If anytime he recover it...he will be sooooOOOOOO piss off....jajajajajajjajaj, that will be nice...
see you soon!!!

Looks like Raoul is using Riki, but it seems that he might develop feelings for him. Awesome style, I'm fond of how you write the characters. please update soon.

I don't complain if you want to write and write and write and...MAKE ME HAPPY!!!
XD No kiding.
This chapter...OMG! I laugh so much at the end. Raoul and Riki figthing like teens for Iason..and all Iason could think (or dream) about was: "which hole to drill first" ...jajajajaja....JAJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJ JAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAJAJ!!! God...i don't understand how will he sleep well with that kinf of images on his brain..i couldn't...>///< (nasal blood...)...eeemmmm...sorry...
Anyway...I see a dark future for Raoul (my not so cute anymore Raoul). I mean...sex can be a drug...he can get obsesed with it and even if he just want Iason...Riki IS riki, not any stupid and not so sexy pet. My guess? He is going to end just like Iason, and him (Iason) will remember everything and hell will be relished!!! Buajajajjajajajjajajjajajajajjajajjaajajja...cof..cof...sorry. My evil person sometimes takes over my body...-_-'''
See you soon!!! (I hope..i wish...i dream...)

Question time?

What is Jupiter actually up to? Why didn't she have Riki destroyed after mind wipping Iason? Why place him with Raoul? What game is she playing, because this is definitely a game. . .

As to Iason. . . yes he is more layback in private, but his instinct seems to be in tact. . . but at the moment, he 'thinks' he should feel more for Raoul, and sex is a great binding tool for Raoul to achieve this goal. I feel that if he crosses that line completely, then Riki will never get him back.

Riki's point is a valid one. . . he kissed Raoul on the lips because he feels that is what he has done in the past, and he is trying to find his memory. but he has always kissed Riki and has probably kissed him in just that way on his forehead.

Raoul is playing dirty. . . and unless something jars Iason's memory or he starts to feel something towards Raoul's pet more than a sex drive, Raoul will be the winner in this round. I'm sure that to get Iason in his bed, he would even agree to bottom, although he appears to be petrified by that thought. He has to appear like he knows what he is doing and he is a 'virgin'. . .so I guess Riki would have to 'take' him to teach him what to do 'again' XD

As to that last dream of Iason's. . at the moment his hormones are talking, but as he gets more involved with the 'pet' and Raoul (bleh) I would love to see those visions get more convoluted. Dream pet drawing him in, while dream Raoul gets darker and perhaps more gets revealed in the dream state XD

Perhaps next time, more inner workings of Iason's mind? What is really going on in his head?

Thanks for the quick update. . . shall continue to look forward to whenever the next one is.