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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting :)
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definitely around for this story. ..and if you can't update as quickly. . .well you did spoil us last time around. .. so be it.
This chapter moves the story along nicely. Although I am confused over Raoul. In the first part of this chapter, he seems to have 'kissing' skills of some sort, and yet later on when he asks Riki to teach him, he is a complete novice. Perhaps besides being taught how to do it, he should also be asking, what Iason likes. . .which would make a conquest even easier but oh so wrong. . .
Iason is a puzzle at the moment. My understanding is that at work he is 'himself' but at home in his personal life, he has no idea who he was or how he acted. He is almost to mild, serene, and obliging, not the man of ice who commands and is full of hidden heat and lust.
His dreams and headaches are a dead give away that somewhere in there the real Iason lurks. But does it lurk near enough to the surface so that he recognizes that whatever he does with Raoul might be a turn on, but is still wrong? Or will he try and convince himself that this is all part of the'so called accident' and push himself to act as he thinks he should act, going against instinct?
Damn, I'm going to drive you crazy again aren't I?
Well, just to conclude... a great chapter, will look forward to when ever you update next XD
This chapter moves the story along nicely. Although I am confused over Raoul. In the first part of this chapter, he seems to have 'kissing' skills of some sort, and yet later on when he asks Riki to teach him, he is a complete novice. Perhaps besides being taught how to do it, he should also be asking, what Iason likes. . .which would make a conquest even easier but oh so wrong. . .
Iason is a puzzle at the moment. My understanding is that at work he is 'himself' but at home in his personal life, he has no idea who he was or how he acted. He is almost to mild, serene, and obliging, not the man of ice who commands and is full of hidden heat and lust.
His dreams and headaches are a dead give away that somewhere in there the real Iason lurks. But does it lurk near enough to the surface so that he recognizes that whatever he does with Raoul might be a turn on, but is still wrong? Or will he try and convince himself that this is all part of the'so called accident' and push himself to act as he thinks he should act, going against instinct?
Damn, I'm going to drive you crazy again aren't I?
Well, just to conclude... a great chapter, will look forward to when ever you update next XD
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this idea. Iason doesn't remember and Riki is under raoul's mercy and who seems to be attracted to him. please update soon, icant wait to see how things go.
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!!! Nice starting! Nice history! Poor characters...XD
No, kiding, poor Riki at least. without Iason, i'll also cry the hole night, but well, aparently Raoul actaully wants them together, or so it seems...better just wait to the next chapter.
See ya!!!
No, kiding, poor Riki at least. without Iason, i'll also cry the hole night, but well, aparently Raoul actaully wants them together, or so it seems...better just wait to the next chapter.
See ya!!!
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You really haven't wasted any time in starting a new story :) And it has started off so well. . .
The beginning chapter grabs you in, because there are so many questions to be answered. What is going on? Why was Iason's mind wiped? What is Jupiter up to? What is Raoul up to? What was Riki and Iason's relationship at that point. . . was it beyond pet and master, or is Riki only feeling regret now? And these are just the ones pouring off the top of my head, without going into any deep thought - rofl.
I think, with your imagination running riot, we are both going to enjoy ourselves immensely in this new story of yours.
(any chance of that little epilogue I 'hinted at' to round out the other wonderful tale?)
Till the next chapter :)
The beginning chapter grabs you in, because there are so many questions to be answered. What is going on? Why was Iason's mind wiped? What is Jupiter up to? What is Raoul up to? What was Riki and Iason's relationship at that point. . . was it beyond pet and master, or is Riki only feeling regret now? And these are just the ones pouring off the top of my head, without going into any deep thought - rofl.
I think, with your imagination running riot, we are both going to enjoy ourselves immensely in this new story of yours.
(any chance of that little epilogue I 'hinted at' to round out the other wonderful tale?)
Till the next chapter :)