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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do you have any idea how happy it makes to see that you've updated "Do You Remember?"!?!?!? You have made my day. Regardless of being incomplete, this is one of my all time favorite AnK fanfictions. I hope this means you will continue to update on a regular basis again... pretty please?
You left us hanging just as you decided to put a major twist in the plot and give Riki a new identity as "Agent Black" after he supposedly died and just as Iason pleads with Jupiter to alter/erase his memories of Riki's existence...talk about a cliffhanger! Once again they cross paths without prior knowledge of each other, but still chemistry remains intense between them and the sparks of lust blaze, but then...(the sound of crickets chirping in the background)...nothing for over a year.
It's fabulous to have you back, a year+ long hiatus notwithstanding. Anticipating the next chapter, hope it's a juicy one.
-missmotoko
You left us hanging just as you decided to put a major twist in the plot and give Riki a new identity as "Agent Black" after he supposedly died and just as Iason pleads with Jupiter to alter/erase his memories of Riki's existence...talk about a cliffhanger! Once again they cross paths without prior knowledge of each other, but still chemistry remains intense between them and the sparks of lust blaze, but then...(the sound of crickets chirping in the background)...nothing for over a year.
It's fabulous to have you back, a year+ long hiatus notwithstanding. Anticipating the next chapter, hope it's a juicy one.
-missmotoko
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really, REALLY, love this story so far. And for English to not be your native language, your grammer is DAMN good.^_~*
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY HELL!!!!!
Did Jupiter just inadvertently put Iason & Riki back together?????
The "Wiry Old Bitch" is gonna blow a gasket when she finds out.....
YAY! Raoul has grown a pair and he's supporting Katze in finding Riki and bringing him back to Iason.
WAA! Poor Kirie! Why did you loose your mind man? Tell me you aren't spacing out because you think Riki died.
I have to say now that I'm done talking to fictional characters, this chapter has helped to dry my tears only a little though. Its a bit upsetting knowing that my favorite lovers are so close and still so far. Riki, I don't see him getting his memory back so easily; but Iason is already feeling his return. Hespera, please don't tell me that during the trade conference something is going to happen toward Iason which will put Riki in serious danger, just so that Iason will move all of Amoi to save his lover. Also will Raoul & Katze be attending the trades as well and it they are, are they going to be the reason that something bad happens to our lovers?
Here I am a loyal reader *biting my nails in suspense* awaiting your next chapter.
Thanks again for the great reading {*o*}
Did Jupiter just inadvertently put Iason & Riki back together?????
The "Wiry Old Bitch" is gonna blow a gasket when she finds out.....
YAY! Raoul has grown a pair and he's supporting Katze in finding Riki and bringing him back to Iason.
WAA! Poor Kirie! Why did you loose your mind man? Tell me you aren't spacing out because you think Riki died.
I have to say now that I'm done talking to fictional characters, this chapter has helped to dry my tears only a little though. Its a bit upsetting knowing that my favorite lovers are so close and still so far. Riki, I don't see him getting his memory back so easily; but Iason is already feeling his return. Hespera, please don't tell me that during the trade conference something is going to happen toward Iason which will put Riki in serious danger, just so that Iason will move all of Amoi to save his lover. Also will Raoul & Katze be attending the trades as well and it they are, are they going to be the reason that something bad happens to our lovers?
Here I am a loyal reader *biting my nails in suspense* awaiting your next chapter.
Thanks again for the great reading {*o*}
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!!You should have kept going!!(with oral sex thingy)(blush)I'am confused Riki did sound like he lost his memory,he didn't recognize Iason?Why did the police took his body for?Thanx for letting me know for the story!!(hugs)
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well this chapter certainly opens up new dimensions to this story. But where do you go from here. For the first time Riki and Iason are together, and even though they are employer and employee, they are not master and servant/pet. They are now meeting on an equal stage, which gives this a whole new area to cover.
Problem 1: If they don't regain their memories, then this is just a short planet affair of what might have been and they go their separate ways when Iason returns to Amoi.
Problem 2: If they do remember, then old attitudes will probably resurface as well, resurrecting the old issues. Would Iason really be able to put that behind him and put an ex Pet on equal footing with him?
Problem 3: What game is she playing? Did she do this on purpose or is this just fate...
Problem 4. Katze.. . . I can't believe he is safe from Jupiter. . . does she want him to find Riki? She kept giving him 'strange' looks while feeding him information. . . as if to say, my hands are tied, go find out the truth. . .but why?? Iason and Riki know their is an attraction between them would Katze's interference bring the memory to the surface....was that implanted in their memory wipe.
Yes, my dear, you've created a load of problems, now please get to work and give us the solutions :)
Enjoyed greatly, hope the next chapter is soon :)
Problem 1: If they don't regain their memories, then this is just a short planet affair of what might have been and they go their separate ways when Iason returns to Amoi.
Problem 2: If they do remember, then old attitudes will probably resurface as well, resurrecting the old issues. Would Iason really be able to put that behind him and put an ex Pet on equal footing with him?
Problem 3: What game is she playing? Did she do this on purpose or is this just fate...
Problem 4. Katze.. . . I can't believe he is safe from Jupiter. . . does she want him to find Riki? She kept giving him 'strange' looks while feeding him information. . . as if to say, my hands are tied, go find out the truth. . .but why?? Iason and Riki know their is an attraction between them would Katze's interference bring the memory to the surface....was that implanted in their memory wipe.
Yes, my dear, you've created a load of problems, now please get to work and give us the solutions :)
Enjoyed greatly, hope the next chapter is soon :)
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OoO'''
KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW, THIS WAS A HELL OF A CHAPTER!!!! I LOVE IT! EVERY WORD OF IT!!!!
AMAZING! HOW CAN YOU THINK THIS KIND OF PLOTS, AN MORE LIKE IT, THE TWIST YOU CREATE ARE SPECTACULAR!!!!
OK, i'm tired of scream...jijiji
As Jupiter said, apparently this mind erase is better that the late one...she has learn -_- You might think, "Oppps, poor Jupiter, everything is beginning again, she lost her time" but...i don't know, she is THAT: JUPITER! The great machine who control everything and see all, and...she made that mistake? Mmmm, i don't buy it. I believe she is trying to put them together again, so Iason remember and so, they can be happy...specially because when Iason remember again, he will actually marry Riki as Raoul did with Katze....or at least that's what i want....>//<
Of course that will mean she gave up and decide that Iason's future rest next to riki's...and that is asking to much...
Hope to see you soon!!! PLEASE!!!!
KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW, THIS WAS A HELL OF A CHAPTER!!!! I LOVE IT! EVERY WORD OF IT!!!!
AMAZING! HOW CAN YOU THINK THIS KIND OF PLOTS, AN MORE LIKE IT, THE TWIST YOU CREATE ARE SPECTACULAR!!!!
OK, i'm tired of scream...jijiji
As Jupiter said, apparently this mind erase is better that the late one...she has learn -_- You might think, "Oppps, poor Jupiter, everything is beginning again, she lost her time" but...i don't know, she is THAT: JUPITER! The great machine who control everything and see all, and...she made that mistake? Mmmm, i don't buy it. I believe she is trying to put them together again, so Iason remember and so, they can be happy...specially because when Iason remember again, he will actually marry Riki as Raoul did with Katze....or at least that's what i want....>//<
Of course that will mean she gave up and decide that Iason's future rest next to riki's...and that is asking to much...
Hope to see you soon!!! PLEASE!!!!
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad my last review never went through and I don't know why, but I'll try to make this 1 as good as the 1 I completed 2 minutes ago (waa and it was a long 1 anyway here I go with the short version).
I so loved the latest chapter of "Do You Remember?" it had me in tears (especially when Iason refused to give up Riki's love confession and Riki's dying wish to see the one he loved), but that did NOT stop me from reading it a few more times. I am so sick of Jupiter now it is ridiculous, she really needs to my her own business. Any Hoo back to what I was saying, I have an idea, (light-bulb springs on) tell me if I'm on track with this 1. Katze & Raoul are going to be the key to bring our lover's back together. Katze is going to coerce Raoul (with some special lovin') to "encourage" Iason's memory's. Seeing that the 2 are away on their honeymoon right now it would only be natural that they would do them this favor in return. Also our lovely red-headed, gold eyed HACKER is going to find out that Jupiter sent Riki off world. I kinda figured that out on my own because of the police presence in the end of the story (NOBODY called the police, Jupiter HAD to be monitoring Iason's communication and when Riki contacted him she sent out her "special forces" and if Riki wasn't dying I think she would have had him killed or worse).
I'm looking forward to the next chapter,
Smooches,
Mikki {*.~}
I so loved the latest chapter of "Do You Remember?" it had me in tears (especially when Iason refused to give up Riki's love confession and Riki's dying wish to see the one he loved), but that did NOT stop me from reading it a few more times. I am so sick of Jupiter now it is ridiculous, she really needs to my her own business. Any Hoo back to what I was saying, I have an idea, (light-bulb springs on) tell me if I'm on track with this 1. Katze & Raoul are going to be the key to bring our lover's back together. Katze is going to coerce Raoul (with some special lovin') to "encourage" Iason's memory's. Seeing that the 2 are away on their honeymoon right now it would only be natural that they would do them this favor in return. Also our lovely red-headed, gold eyed HACKER is going to find out that Jupiter sent Riki off world. I kinda figured that out on my own because of the police presence in the end of the story (NOBODY called the police, Jupiter HAD to be monitoring Iason's communication and when Riki contacted him she sent out her "special forces" and if Riki wasn't dying I think she would have had him killed or worse).
I'm looking forward to the next chapter,
Smooches,
Mikki {*.~}
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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This was one of a hell chapter!! I cried like there was no tomorrow....TT-TT Buuuuaaaaa!!!! Poor Riky! Poor Iason!!! Poor Kyrie! Poor Guy! poor...everyone! But that end (or should i say, start)well girl...that was just beautifull, congrants. You make a hole new turn over like i haven't seeing before...kkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! It amazing. please continue soon or i might die waiting!!
PD: By the way...imagine the faces of Katze and Raoul when they come back from they honey mon..OoO'''
This was one of a hell chapter!! I cried like there was no tomorrow....TT-TT Buuuuaaaaa!!!! Poor Riky! Poor Iason!!! Poor Kyrie! Poor Guy! poor...everyone! But that end (or should i say, start)well girl...that was just beautifull, congrants. You make a hole new turn over like i haven't seeing before...kkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! It amazing. please continue soon or i might die waiting!!
PD: By the way...imagine the faces of Katze and Raoul when they come back from they honey mon..OoO'''
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Things got complicated. I wonder who will break the news to Iason and how he'll react.
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what the?It's so confusing at the end....Agent Black?Did Riki lost his memory also?