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Think this was the strongest chapter yet. Good characterization, strong plot, motiviation, truths coming out as well as hidden. . . but once Iason is mindwiped...and although a willing one this time around, it will be very hard not to fall into the trap of repeating the first part of this story. Or him regaining his memory by getting a memory jog.

Riki is a different issue, and there are quite a few things there that were left open. ie....this is Ceres, why did the police show up like that....dead bodies there are a dime a dozen. . . Who did the mind wipe? Where are Katze and Raoul in all this. I can see Raoul trying to sit back and conform, but Katze is another matter. And you just can't leave Kirie tied to the bed or forgiving Guy that easily. . .Personally, I would love to see him walk out the door with Sid, who I always thought had a nicer nature.

Hope you update soon :)

Things are going downhill pretty fast for Riki. And going back everything will just crumble around him too.

I'm listening to this very sad song..the perfect scenary for this chapter..T-T iason is just...an Idiot. I'm sorry with myself for saying this but, is true...he is an selfish-proud-idiot... (sigh)
About Katze and Raoul, what a susprise when they return for their honeymoon...jijij I know, i know, it isn't for laughing but...i just do.
It kind of weird to see we are returning to the beginig...just hope it end well...

Nooooooooooooooo!Don't erase his mind!It will be such a long story.....then i have to wait..(cries)When i read the part when Iason was talking it sounds like he wants to cry or he was crying.Now this is going to be a start all over.And u took so long.Evantually i did not get why Iason behave like this?Thank u!

Please send me something at yaoifangirl89@gmail.com about the story.I got curious.

Hello dear, dear Hespera,

It surprises me how Iason is taking turns on things; treating Riki like rubbish and ignoring him... I really thought he was uninterested in the mongrel, that something hit his head and made him snap out of his longings, seeing Raoul and Katze happily ever after like that. Actually, it's like a circle happening again (when you leave out the fact that we know Iason is doing this to actually not lose Riki at all). In the beginning we have Iason ignorant of Riki's existence, he doesn't acknowledge him, he doesn't love him. And now we have Iason who purposely ignores Riki and not acknowledging his excistence. It's like a deja vu, but then even more tragic (and I like that).

Now for Iason, poor, poor mr Blondie! He doesn't realise what he's doing with his 'special' treatment to make Riki more attached to him. It works the other way around of course, no doubt. Who can blame the mongrel? I greatly agree with Riki; run, while you can... I wonder if it'll make Iason mad... will the Blondie chase Riki and punish him? I think not, really. Iason probably regrets much when he finds out about the result of his behaviour. I'd say: server you right, mr Blondie.

And now this reminds me of how Raoul actually got pwned in his face by Katze (the scene where K. received the job under the table from a whore). You certainly know how to set scores with Blondies. Now I am quitting this long review, since my teacher is patrolling behind my back now. (I'm refraining myself from using shocking words, in case someone glances upon it, lol!) Until the next chapter!

Oh wait, I suspect Guy getting together with Kirie, by the way. I guess I'll find out the next chapter ;) Wouldn't know why he'd hang out with such a brat, though... Unless he's still obsessed with Riki and Kirie is the closest match he can get.

This story shows just how manipulative Jupiter can be and the sneaky side of Raoul, but it also show the commitment between Iason & Riki. I had to jump for joy when he got his memory back and almost died when he was within breathes of killing Riki, that really should been put upon Raoul. Then the last chapter how sad, I really had to cry as it was progressing. I absolutely love how Riki helped the odd couple to get together (even though they deceived his beloved), but I am ever so disappointed in Iason for not taking Riki as more than a pet (giving he stayed with him through everything he went through ). I know that he had to have something special in store for the beautiful-dark haired-mongrel because it in Iason's nature to upstage Raoul. Katze on the other hand should have know how his friend felt and tried harder to fix things. He knew that Riki had given his all to be with Iason including almost his life on several occasions. Hell Katze himself was part of Riki's demise in the beginning, I am shocked at Amber Eyes' obvious selfish side. I know that the Raoul/Katze pair was bound to happen, but why at the expense of Iason & Riki. I just hope that Iason can find Riki before it's too late and really hope the dear blue eyed god will move the heavens to make up for the horrible over sight on his part. Please keep the awesome story coming. I love it to death. Look forward to the next chapter.

OMG!!! YEAHHHHH!!!! That move is going to rock Iason world!!! Goog for Riki!! I'm goingto celebrate 2 things today: new year and Riki's freedom!!!
Of course, things aren't so easy. Sure the first place Iason will search is Guy's house...because he knows it right? Anyway...I?M SO HAPPY! Lets notforget about Raoul and Katze,they deserve every single second together. But...now i think about it...will all that unhappy group of blondies...maybe something happen...no? No...NONONONONONONONONO!!! Please! Just forget what i said!!! XD
Happy new year!!!!

Wow it has been a long time hasn't it?

In a way this has become an interval chapter introducing new ideas and several new directions.

I can understand Riki's feelings and I like the fact that he has enough gumption not to lie down and let Iason belittle him, but leaves. I think it is also important to note that with his computer skills he could have left at any time during their relationship, but didn't.

Iason. . .well the Blondies for all their bluster and so called superiority seem to have more issues than the average man. Iason's 'fear' of losing Riki is what this is all about and because of this, he has actually lost him.

Raoul and Katze. . . Romance in bloom and I won't even touch them at the moment.

Riki going back to Guy? Well I can understand why, but this is Guy, who has never gotten over Riki. . .so poor Kiri. . .his fragile world is about to fall apart.. .

Next chapter should be 'interesting' indeed. ...

I've always wanted to read a story where Riki somehow manages to escape from Iason's clutches. I'm glad that you're still continuing this story, an I'm excited to see how Riki's escape is going to hit Iason and the story events. Please update soon.