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I've been enjoying this story very much. I love this anime and it's been quite a while since I have read any fic in this fandom. This one is very good be ause of the complexity of the plot. It seems very well thought out....until this chapter. Yes Iason and Riki are back together and Rauol is alone. And I feel bad for him because it's not entirely his fault that he did what he did (keeping Riki, pursuing Iason). But throwing Katze in there as a possible love interest for him is random and doesn't follow your storyline. Katze is in love with Daryl - not Riki, not Rauol. He was going to go so far as to sneak behind Iason's back to get Darly restored. And he had been making out with Daryl for months, so it's not like Riki was his first kiss in a long time. It would be nice to see everyone happy but sometimes, not everyone wins. Someone here is going to lose, unless it ends up being a three way. But the way you've written Iason as being so jealous and obsessive over Riki, I can't see him being willing to share.

It will be interesting to see where you go with this and to see how you resolve everything. Thanks for sharing.

Hehe, Riki really knows how to reel his admireres in. Can't wait to read more.

OMG!! you should put a warning on stories like this. Something like "Do not read in public!! Unless you want to be kick out of a library for screaming at a computer!!!" Totally awesome story! I wanted to hit someone while crying loudly about what you did to Rauol! How could you do that to him?!!? (takes a deep breath) I am okay now. Either way, great story!! Please, please keep it up! You are my break from RL!

Hi! I'm glad i made you laugh...and just with true and more true...you are Jupiter, and that's going to be my nickname from now.
I love this chapter: of course, because they're together againg....soooo cute!!! >///< (Of course, there wasn't anything cute in the "encounter" on the floor but...you know what i mean)
I also like the...mmmm..."realistic" way you're handling things...i mean: it was imposible for Iason just to keep his mouth shut and forget the "thing" with Raoul...the most normal behavior anyone could have...and of course, the fact that he doesn't want to speak to him, it's normal to...but sad for my....My poor Raoul!!! All lonely and with broken hearth is his home...without nobody to hug him...to kiss him...to....send him to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JIjijiji...or maybe....you're already thinking of sending him a cute read head who also need someone to hug him......to kiss him....to....SEND THEM BOTH TO MEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rofl. . .Damn this is good.

So Riki and Iason are back together, but once again Iason has jealousy issues. I don't think even if Raoul falls into Katze's arms, Iason would willingly become friends again. Everytime he would look at him he would see Riki in his arms.

And you can't have Iason remember, unless it is a nostalgic remember? An "I know I loved you once, but things changed and I moved on." And in truth they did. Iason fell in love with Riki, and what's more important, he 'remembered him' whereas he was satisfied with the situation with Raoul.

As to Raoul. . .poor soul, he really has lost it all at the moment. . . your brief description is really a man falling apart because he has nothing in his life. Well, lets' see if Katze can make a difference :)

Update soon. . . .

What a twist! Cant wait to read more.

Well that was 'unexpected'. . . rofl

Now my problem is I have an evil mind. . . . so I really can't decide if you are serious or not. Is Jupiter telling the truth. . .or is this the beginning of some other dire plan. . .no matter which way you go, it will be enjoyable, but I'm still seeing that threesome. . .Unless. . . Katze is there, perhaps Katze is the catalyst to get Raoul and Iason to become friends again and in the process, they find each other . . (Hey Katze needs some love to :) ) And I can't see Riki moderating between the two of them.

Raoul's behaviour in the first part of this story was 'not normal' is the best way to describe it. But then he is still recovering from the rape, and after Jupiter's revelations, his behavior does make sense. Curious though that Riki reminds of Iason. . .although Riki is really his only connection with his former lover, so yes it does makes sense that he would want him now because he can't have the other.

As to Iason. . .the one thing I did note as I glanced through the first chapters again ( big grin) is that until Raoul interested Iason in 'sex' again', Iason was really happy not to be going anything. It was only when that urge was reawakened that things got out of hand.

And no wonder he had at that stage visions of two bottoms pointing up at him. . rofl. . . seems not everything was forgotten even from the first mind wipe.

Well, I really can't second guess where you would be going next with this. . so I'll just wait and be surprised.

:)

O MY GOD....that was...unexpected...for real... I just...wow...
Ok, time to clap my cheeks and think straigth. As i said, jupited is just mind-fucker...altrough i should say you are the one, because is your fic...so...you are Jupiter!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDX (No kidding)
Thanks for not killing Katze, i like him (fics and anime).
Don't you draw? It would be a hell of a gif (for you, for us fans) to see some pictures of, for example Riki on his stunnig clothes...thet will be nice. I don't offer myself because i just CAN'T draw a person.
The thing with Iason and Raoul's past was a nice idea i believe you get from the anime, after all it's was ovbiosly they had something, someday. But the idea of the memoru erase, and the suicide and the depresion...that was good...specilly because if i was iason, i'll start thinking about Raoul and: "OMG, poor of him...and he loves me...he is alone...he is unhappy..."...i maybe i'll have second thoughs about the hole situation and...i don't know...
And Riki? Maybe he doesn't love Raoul, but he start to feel something for him...even pitty, that's important, and maybe he wont' like the idea of letting him alone (of course, he first will run to iason, but then...he will think...).
Mmmmm, i lot of stuff came to my mind with this chapter, but i don't know english enough to express myself...you should learn spanish...jijijiji.....

Oh!!! I forgot something! I got the feeling that this fic isn't going to be very long...am i correct? Did you write it some were before and i didn't see it? OoO''''

That was AWESOME! This story gets better and better with every chapter, this last one definitely has me on the edge of my seat. Please update soon.