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for Winged One

by mayablackwolf

person angie
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! You have a good writing style so reading this didn't annoy me! I love that you incorporated xxxholic into your fic. It makes sense since all the worlds are connected right? Keep up the good work! >.<
person Soujiro Seta
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Leon doesn't feel ooc, he just seem wiser, I like your story so far, and hope to read more, I wonder what Yuko will have him do for a wish, the cat has eaten the canary =D, i'll be waiting for your writing, thanks for posting it.
person Miel
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought there was more story to this somehow... (scratches head.) weird.
Oh Well, It's a lovely beginning and I would love to know when you are going to update again!
If it's not too much trouble to email that is. Otherwise, I'll just keep a weather-eye on this story.

Really Looking forward to your next Chapter,
Miel
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Petshop of Horrors fandom doesn't get a lot of traffic, don't worry if you don't get too many reviews.

This is an interesting crossover, I'm finding it to be very fun to read. I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.
person anonanon
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Great job! Please update again as soon as you can. *refreshes the page until you do*
person anonanon
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Not very long, but still pretty good. You've got me interested, now you just have to not drop this story like pretty much every other fanfiction writer who writes PTOH fanfiction. Good luck.
person Bunnybop05
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me likening quite alot, update, update.

on that note momo so cuto o
person Jhessail
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had been meaning to review this but hadn't had the time to sit down and actually read because it looks so interesting! But now that I finally got the time, I was not disappointed, and was very glad that it's a nice and easy read so far. I'm also ecstatic by the fact you're using xxXholic for a way for Leon to find D.

I also adore the fact that you can see Leon's slight changes because he had been abandoned by D, it makes sense, and I'm just really glad to see that too. I'm absolutely fascinated by how this story will go and can hardly wait to see what more you'll write! I really can hardly wait to see more of the plot!

Please continue!

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