schedule
October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you did a cc/lelouch pairing. They're so hard to find. 5/5 good job!!
schedule
February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so many hits and no reviews? I had to create an account just because I felt it was unfair, but I've never reviewed anything in my life, so don't expect too much XD
Your grammar feels a bit clumsy and stiff, but I really love the way you describe feelings.
It resembles very much the way I write scenes like this. I'm really not into pure lust-based stories, but I have always loved innocent & sweet love stories so much that I read them purely for seeing the interaction between the characters... And your story is definitely one of those.
Thank you so much for your work on this story, it cheered me up a lot ^-^
I hope you will write more of the same style xDD
Your grammar feels a bit clumsy and stiff, but I really love the way you describe feelings.
It resembles very much the way I write scenes like this. I'm really not into pure lust-based stories, but I have always loved innocent & sweet love stories so much that I read them purely for seeing the interaction between the characters... And your story is definitely one of those.
Thank you so much for your work on this story, it cheered me up a lot ^-^
I hope you will write more of the same style xDD