rate_review Reviews

Love the story and understand. Midterms and finals made it hard to keep up with anything but college the past few months. Sorry for the late review. This is one of my favorite pairings along with Hakkai/Yaone, and Goku/Lirin (those two driving all the grown-ups nuts by exploring newly discovered and fascinating pasttimes with each other). Gojyo andhis brother bar/bed hopping to see who is the hottest kappa would be interesting as well ... But that would just be a side story type thing and could be ongoing.

Love The story and keep up the great work.

Mofaf1

is this gonna be updated because this is a great fic. i hope he gets with the prince. he seems like he can handle him

Huggles and Glomp. I was afraid you'd given up on the story. So glad to see you are ok and the fic hasn't been forgotten. I love the chapter and am so happy to see Sanzo with Kougaiji. I am so hoping they stay together or are at least mated even if they are on opposite sides of the battle. Still kind of hoping for the others to get together in some way ... am sure Dokugaiji would be able to fix his little bro up with a few hotties if they get together. It would still be kind of nice for Yaone and Hakkai to get together since they do have at least an interest or two in common (medicine). Goku and Lirin are just too adorable to not get it on ... and again they have enough in common that they would probably get on well with each other if not for the conflict between their groups ... though I think the two of them getting together might be enough for Sanzo to overlook the different sides of the conflict and team up with Kougaiji.

Love the chapter hon and hope to see more as soon as you can get it.

Well, it is short. :) But I'm happy you updated! XD I hope you'll give us more chapters soon. *puppy eyes* I'm really curious what will happen next. When will Sanzo give in? XD Oh, that will be something! XD

Please don't let this fic die. It is so good and I really want to know what happens next.

mofaf1

Good story, it has left me curious,as to who will be mate. personally i vote for goyjo. I'm a sucker for that pairing.

sigh ... was hoping for more after nanowrimo ended but ... maybe after semester finals???

love this fic and can't see what Kougaiji does to win Sanzo as his and keep Gojyo and Hakkai away.

Would still like to see a bit of a side story with Lirin and Goku stressing all the 'grown ups' out. And as I said ... Yaone might marry Kougaiji but nothing says she ever has to actually share his bed ... she might turn out to be a little slut and shack up in the guest room (or basement adult playroom) with all the rest of the boys while Kougaiji and Sanzo get it on and Lirin and Goku explore previously unexplored territory (for them at least).

To me the "Gojyo/Sanzo, Hakkai/Sanzo, or threesome of Gojyo/Sanzo/Hakkai in what ever order have been too overdone and are relatively boring so I'm keeping my fingers crossed.

mofaf1

wimper, I'm soooo wanting to see what happens next. wimper wimper whine ....

closes eyes and prays really really hard for Kougaiji to be the winner with Gojyo and Hakkai finding cuddles with each other or maybe sharing Yaone (ok so Kougaiji doesn't actually father her kid ... would it really matter if he was legally the dad on paper?) ... and maybe Goku discovers his own massive hormonal rush when he sees Lirin at an opportune moment (hmmm .. maybe she's wearing a white shirt when she gets knocked into the river or something (can we say wet t-shirt contest anyone? Though knowing Gojyo he might go for that too ... horn-dog that he is ... ))

mofaf1

Please update this fic soon, it is so good I can hardly wait for more. I keep hoping for a Kougaiji/Sanzo pairing (it would be hilarious if Sanzo became the alpha of the pair).

mofaf1

I like this story, poor Sanzou, he really needs someone to make sure he's alright. I'm rooting for Hakkai and Gojyo to win, but I think they aren't going to be the winners.