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Please update soon, I'm still rooting for Kougaiji to win and for Gojyo and Hakkai to discover their love for each other ... and for Goku and Lirin to decide to get a bit frisky ... just to upset the grown-ups. I wouldn't be surprised if Yaone had a thing on the side with Dokugaiji as it is (or secret snuggles with Hakkai).

Mofaf1

Your story was my introduction to this fandom (just a few days ago heh). WOW! I freakin' LOVE IT! I have to say I am totally partial to Hakkai/Sanzou, but I am more than happy to sit back and watch where you choose to take the story. EXCELLENT WRITING!! Thanks! :)

It's ok that you deleted my review, I understand that accidents happen. I love the story so far and still hope to see Kougaiji win Sanzo, and maybe Goku growing up a bit and being smitten with Lirin (and her with him) - much to the shagrin of both Kougaiji and the rest of the Sanzo party (other than the smitten Goku). It would also be nice to see Kougaiji's step mom get what's coming to her ... in a big way ... and for Kougaiji to get his real mom back (maybe she could show Lirin what a real mom should be like - and save Kougaiji from having to give his sister 'the talk' .. that might be a bit awkward for him ya know).

mofaf1

sorry about this ... but ... by the way did Sanzo get another gun or have Hakkai and the rest appeared since Sanzo left his gun at the camp with the others when he left in such a hurry. I can't imagine anyone else firing a gun at those two for any reason.

mofaf1

This is a very interresting story. I'm waiting for more! XD Will Kog find Sanzo? :) Will Goku get mad at Hakkai and Gojo? Sanzo left him. That must hurt.

My brain exploded when Hakkai and Goyjo dared to tie up Sanzo. They're soooo asking for it! Great update!! Only some minor mix ups, like I think it was touch shit, instead of tough shit, or something along those lines. I can't wait to read more and soon!! :P I actually tried reviewing this before, but my internet hates me, so if you get a double post I'm sorry!

Update!!!

I'm really interested to see where you will take this story! So far I'm quite happy, and can't wait for more!! :D Please update soon!