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for Dream Weaver

by RhondaKoersvelt

schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Honestly? This is atrocious. Where did you get your spelling from? Fai's name I can understand and maybe Syaoran. But really. It's M-O-K-O-N-A and K-U-R-O-G-A-N-E.

It's there in the manga. If you're just taking what you've heard from the anime, then you are severly missing out. Also, know the difference between "there" "their" and "they're"

Just because it's a one shot doesn't mean you can get just get lazy on your grammar.
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL awesome punchline, I love it. XD I've become of a fan of this threesome since the end of Tsubasa, now that we know the three of them will have to travel together for a long time without Sakura. I love how Mokona is making both Fai and Kuro dream the same things, I'm sure one day they'll walk in and just start doing it, thinking that they're dreaming. XDDDD

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