rate_review Reviews

I loved this fic!

The first plot twist, (where yuuri was the attacker) was very interesting. I also always like to see Gwendal as an active character, especially when it comes to Wolfram (cause he's so caring but tries not to show it~).

Also- your intimate scenes are VERY well written. I couldn't tell you exactly why. I think it might possibly be the detail you put into their actual thoughts as well as their actions (like with Yuuri was fantasizing about the pink nightgown, and how that helped fuel his confidence.) but they were just- really good!

If you ever wrote another KKM fic, I'd be first in line to read it~ thank you for the awesome story!

you have a good plot. but the truth is i find every single chapter too short. And ts not worth the time either. Id rather you just continued it the way it should be.lieut oduchase

That was nice! Not bad at all.

Hi, really nice chapter and story you have here. I have read lots of wedding-description of Yuuri and Wolf but yours sure stand out, it doesn't go all sweety-lovey-dovey but has some conflict in it.
Wish you luck with your computer :)

Aww!!! that was kinda cute in a weird sort of way (lol) i like that the Maou while forceful wasn't really trying to hurt him... i'm guessing the Maou's pride was more hurt than anything by the breakup and acted out.... it was wonderfully written and i read so fast anyways i usually miss the little typos (like the it's)

if there's a mailing list for updates can i be added to it? I can't wait to see where else you take this :)

I've been anxious to see where you will take the story, but I was also a bit frustrated. I respect when people stick to the style of an anime or game that they write about, and originally when you began writing this I felt you were true to the characters but moved to a darker, more serious story line. And I sincerely enjoyed it, but the past few chapters that you have posted (save for the last one of course) were quite fluffy, and seemed to be a bit too reminiscent of the anime for my taste. I feel like you should pick a style and stick with it, (it's only my opinion of course, I'm not trying to bash your story by any means.) But those few chapters seem a bit out of place for the original direction you took us, the readers. Hope to read more soon!

This is such a great story! Please please please update soon!

Yay, there's an update! Wonder what's gonna happen next... update soon!!!

Seriously, nobody's reviewed this? This is a good story, I hope that whoever hurt Wolfram gets caught by Yuri. Soooo curious as to what'll happen next