rate_review Reviews

Awesome erotica, you know if you want to test your writing skills try to expand this story so into the fate/stay night plotline. Just imagine what kind of twist to the story if Shirou was already with Ayako before the grail wars. Otherwise not much else I can comment on.

Nice! Not a pairing I ever really considered, but nicely done. Love how pushy she was, gives her some personality that matches what little we saw of her in the game/show/manga.

I truly love this story. About time someone put a good Ayako story up! She's always been my favorite char, and your portrayal of her is all I've been waiting for these long years of obscure fandom. I hope you chose to continue this story (maybe some roof antics!), or that u write more scenarios involving her! I'm looking forward to your future work! A lengthy, well-written piece. A+++