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omg this is the best ai no kusabi fanfic i ever read... but is incomplete... please I beg you, continue this amazing story

That was great I hope u come back soon I want to know wat happen at the end

And the plot thickens... hehehe. I love it when I see a blondie bottom. Since it is so out of the spectrum of what one would expect. I look forward to more. -Sheleeta

Poor Guy, that's so f'd up what happened to him. But it makes sense why he's so jittery. And I have to go awwww.... to Riki and Iason, so cute. I look forward to the next chapter, as always. Until next time. Sheleeta

Yay! Update! Congratulations on everything you've accomplished. Glad to hear about it. So, now Riki is going to have a little pet of his own eh? Hehe... I can imagine how that kid could be used. Looking forward to when you can update again.

Oh poor Katze, Iason is going to kill his ass *tearing eyes*. He should have just let Raoul kill him because Iason is an inflexible bastard when it comes to obeying him *nose starting run*. When he gets a hold of Katze and finds out about the conversation he had with Raoul there will need to be a new fic written call "Taming Katze, the Blondie's Wrath" *oops that did it WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! sniffles and cries some more*. But I was just thinking what if Iason isn't the one who finds out first *DU-DU-DUUUUUNNNNNNNN*. Katze could be in a whole new world of trouble, I don't see the "Assassinate Iason" group being easy on him at all *bites nails*. Then that would put Iason & Riki in danger *YAY FOR COLLECTING A FIREY LITTLE PET (he rushes in singing "Here I come to save the Mongrel "*. I can't wait to whats gonna happen next to him.

Now lets talk about Raoul & Guy. I know that you had a reason for the small exchange between them and I believe that is to have Guy get uncontrollably jealous. That scene could lead to 1 Blondie doing whatever he can to make it up to 1 Mongrel *smirks voyeuristicly*.

On to Riki & Iason. Even now Riki is in denial of his feelings for Iason. He is such a self masochist. It is a bit out of character for Iason to be so patient. It is quite lovely to see Iason thinking like Riki does and for him to he confused. I really hope his confusion leads to Iason being topped first to prove how much he loves the All Dark Mongrel. I know he wouldn't stand for it more than once, at least not in the beginning anyway, but it could crack the tough nut who is the famed "Riki the Dark" *Eyes flashing in excitement*.

I am longing to see what happens next in your story.

Until then {^.*}

Thanks for the chapter! :)

What I really liked, was the end of this chapter, Iason's and Riki's interaction. You managed to show Iason's tender and considerate side, and although it's maybe not characteristically Iason's nature, it's nicely refreshing point of view.

And it's nice that Iason's and Riki's (future) relationship has time to develop.

Poor Riki, always gets so confused because of Iason. But that is just his lot in life. Nothing he can do about it.

YAY!!!!!
Iason actually confessing his feelings to Riki (so UN-Iason like). I am so feeling the live with Katze thing, although I'm not sure that will be such a great idea (especially when Iason finds out that Katze & Riki know each other). We both know that Iason is jealous and having someone know "his Riki" better than him will cause a ton of trouble for all involved. If Katze thought his world was over at the end of the call he will be sure of it when Iason shows up with Riki in tow. As for Riki we know he is never honest about his feelings so for him to admit that he's feeling Iason will rock all of Eos. But when he admits it Riki will be feeling the sweet pain that only Iason can give and I am dying to see it happen. As always I loved your chapter and I look forward to the next one, so until then I will end this review with a Yaoi-Fan-Girl scream.

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! So hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! {^.^}

Thanks for the chapter! (and the previous chapter as well)

Your spelling has improved ways! I'm sorry I'm bringing it up again, but it does affect on reader's reading pleasure.

I'm not quite sure why, but I thought this was your best chapter so far.