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Another enjoyable chapter. I liked how you showed some humor in Raoul. Too many people write him and Guy off. And I'm looking forward to seeing how Iason reacts to getting his hair dyed, that's going to be hilarious.

Nice, poor Guy. I personally like Guy, though he did flip; I think he's a bit misunderstood. Look forward to the next installment.

Interesting story, now that pieces begin to fall together ... I did not know how much you are into continuing your story, so I just expected to see how things evolve, before posting a comment.

I like it so far, with Riki being Riki, yet still generous and good natured, with Iason, a little softer than what we know from the books (but I like him like that), with Raoul, bent of solving things, especially since this is about his best friend, with Guy, a true representative of Mongrels, with no trust in Blondies whatsoever.

I may be part of a small majority, but I love reading fics including the Raoul/Guy pairing. I would love to see how Raoul wins Guy's trust (and hopefully, falls for him in the process), but you don't have to listen to me, since it's your story. (I loved 'Wasteland', as well.) I cannot help but notice that Guy already thinks Raoul to be beautiful, that's a good sign.

On the other hand, we have Iason and Riki, brought together by circumstances, and many things may happen in cramped places. :)

That weird Blondie, from Raoul's workplace ... maybe he has something to do with Iason's misfortune? He is way too suspicious.

Keep up the good work.

C'mon Riki, Iason isn't a bad guy once you get to know him. And 'sides I don't know what all the fuss is about, I for one would have LOVED to wake up in Iasons lap!!*grins* He's so SMEXY!! Now do what you were going to do in the first place and help Iason, I mean put it this way he will owe you BIG time for this.*grins* Now when it comes to Guy, I really don't care WHAT happens to him, 'cause I HATE his ass!!*frowns* So Raoul torture him all you want.*huffs*

It is going along nicely, though I am noticing some spelling errors, but nothing that I can't get past. I look forward to your next installment. Good luck in your classes.

I enjoy your concept, it is really unique. And the quick update is much appreciated. I look forward to the next chapter.