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by Saka

person polka dot
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was a nice time out, very smutty and hot
person polka dot
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice little PWP, but I think any director with those two on the set should keep a hose handy.
person Anise
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
These two can't seem to be anything but hot and you managed to portray their personalities perfectly :) I think one of my favourite things was the way Katou talked, it's easy to imagine him saying those things plus I'm a bit of a sucker for dirty talk when it's done well ;) I'm glad I found this it was a great read, there aren't nearly enough HwD stories being written so I certainly hope you consider writing them again. Maybe we could even get a sequel of what happened once they got home :)

Wonderful story, I loved reading it and look forward to seeing more of your stuff ^_^
person JadedSoul
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was pretty hot! You also did a good job of capturing the character's personalities which isn't always easy to do in a shorter one-shot, but is always appreciated by fans of this beloved couple. Awesome job.

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