rate_review Reviews

This was... depressingly wonderful. It's been a while since I've read something of these two, which is a confoundingly idiotic thing as they are perhaps my favorite pairing. So this was a nice return! I've never read anything with this concept before, so it was really refreshing. A great story overall!

I enjoyed it!! The story read very smoothly and seemed complete. The characters were beleivable. There was warmth and affection between the characters. The sex was hot and erotic and I think this is the first story I have read with phone sex that takes place in a car, so......really original!!!

Pit stop would be hillarious with the others. Great story. I admired that you wrote it so well. I have nothing to say about it beside excellent! I can't decided though. Pit stop might be odd for Aya since he's so shy, which would make the other option more appealing to Aya's character. All in all it's up to you of course. And the title works. I love it for this story. Hope to read more of this story plus your other stories. Keep up the great work!