rate_review Reviews

Seriously, this entire story is fantastic. Please continue it! It's great! You're really such a good writer, and it's rare to find a story in this genre with such depth and mystery. Wow. Just wow.

More please. This is adorable. And I'm dying to know what happens next, and what's in those letters... gah. Update soon!

First off, I love the additions of all of the game references, and I think you should add some more obscure ones, to games that perhaps not many people have heard of, seeing as Matt is an avid gamer.
It's a very believable story, and the character's personality's are spot on.
One thing though, I suggest, if you're writing in the first person, stick to one PoV, placing an author's note telling you that the PoV has changed makes the story seem a little clunky.
Overall, fantastic, I'm bookmarking this for when you update.