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March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very nice story that I have read a few times in the past but do you think you shall update it?
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just found this although I noticed it hasn't been worked on in a year, whatever happened to this story? From the story codes it looked like you had a lot planned and I was really interested in seeing where this was going as you don't see many pairings with Shinji and her. I was also wondering if any of the others get involved given the hints of the story codes you gave.
It was a very nice long and well done story so far and I hope that you'll come back to this since I'm eager to see where you take this story.
It was a very nice long and well done story so far and I hope that you'll come back to this since I'm eager to see where you take this story.
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Please write more soon.
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Hope you intend to continue it, so many good stories that die after one or two chapters.
Anyway please continue.
Anyway please continue.
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In a word: excellent. You deal with the characters with imagination and subtlety, and each section of the story never outstays its welcome. It also achieves that rare synergy of cute/sexy. I've yet to watch rebuild, but the addition of Mari has certainly piqued my interest ;-)
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is very good and can not wait to read what happens
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it! ive been looking for a story like this for a LONG time! dont you dare turn into one of those authers who writes one chapter promises more and never does.
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, great set-up and excellent use of characters. I also really enjoyed it because it's one of the few fan pieces that actually deals with Mari. Also kudos for keeping it in the "original" universe. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that was enjoyable. Very nicely written. I hope you continue because the tags hint at some interesting possibilities.