rate_review Reviews

O-there so needs to be more of this. The opening scene of funeral parlor and carnal fantasy - forceful perhaps non-con carnal fantasy - was bold, stark, honest. As a reader I could feel Usami's awaereness that his thoughts were out of place and yet his shamelessness of owning them . I'm not sure the voice Usami's is written in is true to manga/anime but it is believable and likeable-again I think for its honesty. The sadism is displayed in such a way that sounds like Usami is caple of non-con, but the subtle phrases about wanting Takahashi to beg him for it along with that last thought to give Misaki "one more chance" suggests he's really not avrapist. At least I hope if this were to continue there would be no actual rape. From what I've seen so far you are a very capable writer and I'm sure could continue to hit all those sadist buttons without it being non-con.

As stated, this is a great beginning. It can stand alone but I would love to what else you could do with this story if it were continued. Thank you for writing and posting.

O.O Wow...I'd kinda like to see a follow up to this...maybe his reaction after he falls for Misaki