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gahhhhhhhhhhhhh do an UPDATE for the love of yaoi .... i cant take it any more i need to read the rest of this

Hahahaha XD

This is actually the only pokémon story I've ever read, and I love it so far XD Excellent!

This is so cool so far :D I can't wait to read the next chapter...it's kinda fun to think of Ash being related to Brock. (I keep forgetting his last name is Harrison now, so it took me a minute to figure that out. When I first started getting involved in Pokemon, it was Flint.) Anyway, love it!

Kay, you really need to write a better summary for this story, because I wasn't reading it for MONTHS because I thought it'd be totally different than how it is. And this is AWESOME! Seriously, seriously awesome! I just loved this last chapter, it really made me crack up. I can't wait to see what happens when Ash gets to the Sinnoh Resort (or if we can find out who framed him for stealing his Pokemon). And Gary. Oh, Gary. You are lawls.

Seriously, please write more of this. I BEG you.

First, I would like to say that I really like how this story is going so far. The little adjustments you made to the framework of the show really create an almost alternative universe sort of feel, without pressing the boundaries of what's still the Pokemon world. I can wait to read the rest of it, and gleefully hope for some action between old rivals, Pokemon and otherwise. If you have a mailing list for this started, do add me to it.

ahahaha XD I didn't really like your first chapter, but your second chapter is really amusing! ^^

Hope you update soon :>