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by sainmoth14

person Anon
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I love the whole idea of this fic, how you write it that Ash and Paul actually have a secret relationship going on without either Brock or Dawn knowing and that Paul's cold shoulder towards him is actually just an act. Having Brock in the mix, both conflicted and at the same time enjoying what he saw was hilarious too. And the ending was awesome. I liked this fic a lot.

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