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A) At this point in the Sailor Moon Classic Arc they do not know that Sailor Moon is Princess Serenity, so to refer to her as such is incorrect. B) WTH is up with the pointless males. I thought Castor and Pollux were meant to take care of the senshi, not a couple of characters that we could care less about. When we read erotic fanfiction, we really care more about how canon characters get screwed not OCs.

When the series started (queen Batryal) the sailor soldiers were fourteen. When the series ended (Sailor stars) they were sixteen.

Awsome story, man! It's worth of continuation, I'd like to see how senshi are gonna pay these two brats. I'm sure they didn't mean money.

I'll give it a 3 out of 5. This was fun to read, but this ending just doesn't feel right. You did all that to the girls and leave it with a couple of normal guys blackmailing them for sex? That doesn't seem right to me. Serena is left as a quivering mass of bliss on the ground at the height of her little fun and then Bang, the youma is taken down and all that's left is the girls and two guys? You have a talent for writing sex scenes and I'd like to see more and with less used characters if you can. otherwise, good story.

Hot Futanari. Hope to see them double f#ck Jupiter.
SailorNemesis

Interesting story. I do hope to see more. I must wonder what the twins will do to miss Moon.