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I certainly appreciate the update, a lot of authors ask for suggestions but few act on them. Not exactly what I was hoping for in their interactions (though her sucking him was hot) but still good to see more.
SailorNemesis

I certainly enjoyed this. Your prose has a sort of earthly grimness to it that seem very realistic. You have improved greatly since your earlier stories and I have to complement you on that. I have to wonder about the lack of dialogue--was that a stylistic choice? If so, it really enhanced the feeling of loneliness and isolation on Asuka's part. Anyway, good job. Write more. :p

That was very good; one of your better. Erotic and sexy. Would like another chapter were he takes Asuka's bottom while she pretends to ignore him. Then he uses her mouth...
SailorNemesis